Rain (An American Sentence)

I'd rather freeze my ass off in the fucking rain than read your haiku.

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For the weekend mini-challenge at Real Toads. An American sentence is 17 syllables in linear order.

Comments

Sherry Blue Sky said…
Cackling. Your sentence, I hate to tell you, is just two syllables off from BEING a haiku. Ack!
Kerry O'Connor said…
Can't say I wasn't expecting a bit of sabre rattling. According to Ginsberg, it's not a haiku if it's a sentence... but I think it is.
De Jackson said…
Ha! What fun! LOVE this.
Debi Swim said…
Haiku - American sentence.... let the race begin.
grapeling said…
laughing out loud. perfect ~
Sanaa Rizvi said…
*Rolling over the floor laughing* Kudos!
Outlawyer said…
Ha! But what if the rain is warm? (No, no--not a request to read haiku.)
Anonymous said…
To the point!
Sioux Roslawski said…
So, am I reading this correctly? You do not care for haikus? ;)
angie said…
hates haiku. bravo for even showing up. you are too funny
Thotpurge said…
Ha ha.. humour packed into that stretched haiku!
Margaret said…
I read this challenge and wondered about you immediately! HA
Jim said…
Give em Hell, Shay, their Mama's a mare that can't eat hay, I don't eat oats. I'm with Margaret as I wrote mine. It was Senryƫ but that doesn't cut it with you either, it's okay.
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Dani H said…
bwa ha ha ha ha!

you know i changed the name of my blog because you hate haiku.
(smile)

miss you Sis!
LOL (although I know you're serious).

Yeah, but did you have to top it off by showing us all how it's done?
Susie Clevenger said…
lol.... I'm with Rosemary. You smack us with a haiku.

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