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Thursday, March 20, 2008

Garden Of Love

roses,
clover,
then it's
over;
love made,
price paid;
belladonna,
nightshade.

9 comments:

  1. Wonderfully clever as well
    as seductive.

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  2. Thank you, Cynthia. Like you, sometimes I find brevity says more.

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  3. I really like your poetry, very intelligently written. :) Poetry is actually my favorite medium as well, but I've put a pause on my poetry blogs till I graduate and have time to actually add to them again. Thanks for your comment. :)

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  4. Do I sense a haiku-like element of less-is-more here? *ducks* Whatever it is, I like it--tight and extremely succinct--you can't boil it down any cleaner than this. Of the two reposts, both excellent, this is my favorite.

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  5. Love this one! I love the short choppy lines.

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  6. Yep, a definite haiku element (runs and hides behind Hedge).

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  7. Wow! So much, but never too much, just all the right words in the right order. Love it!

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  8. Ha!
    You wrapped this one up very neatly, and the choice of comparative flowers replaces the need for lengthy explanations. Flowers used to a most effective degree here.

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