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Friday, August 1, 2014

Dainty Maid

I'm a delightful, dainty maid
with a girlish giggle and a live grenade--

I felt silly,
so I blew up Billy.
An evil devil murderess,
that's what the judge says.

But let me run and gain plurality,
then my prank is simply policy.

What a dainty little duality.
Would you like to play with me?
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for Marian's music prompt at Real Toads


13 comments:

  1. OMG! Evil. An absolute winner.

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  2. That second line has got to be one of the coolest lines ever!

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  3. The personal insanity of evil seems always instantly dissipated when some leader claims one god wants you to kill some other god's groupies---what you go to hell for as an individual, you go to heaven for as a righteous soldier. I hate this conflict--and your poem shows it up for the simple horror it is.

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  4. Your poem strips away all the pretense...the list of whys of this war..right to the truth. Bravo!

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  5. yesss! *bats eyelids coquettishly and runs off*

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  6. So right - gain plurality and the prank becomes policy. Sizzling writing.

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  7. Joy's comment is spot on … this reads like a nursery rhyme - as you know - the deadly seriousness behind it chills one to the bone.

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  8. wise radical




    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>

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  9. Yep! It's pretty much what she said.

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  10. We girls will all want one now :-)
    Sorry, but you provide some much needed laughter.

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