
In a dream I saw a face
Which was half the moon and
Half a woman's face.
I said, "You are so beautiful."
She said, "I am dying."
In a lake, at night, in summer,
We swam naked;
I offered myself just below the surface,
She did the same for me from just above.
I relaxed and let my body float up--
She let herself float down;
And when we met,
We called that making love.
Now, I am as still as the stars in the moment of a kiss--
I am not all I wanted to be,
But I am more than I was before that night.
"Darling," I whispered, "I don't want you to leave."
She wrapped herself around me and said, "I already have..."
So I gave her a garland of poems and a touch of fingertips,
And sweetly lied that I would be all right.
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Thanks to Cloudia, who introduced me to the story of Chang-O and the Moon Rabbit. I have taken certain liberties with it here.























16 spoke through the ouija:
Well done, Cloudia. Great seed you planted. And well done, Fireblossom. What a garden you have grown from that seed.
I like the liberties, Fireblossom, and this story puts a different perspective on being followed by moon shadow.
No wonder Cat had to leave the building; with a hase like that little kitties get burned--cool moon kisses are like that, I hear.
Nice lie, though.
Tschuess,
Chris
* let's body move with the music *
(hint, relates to the response I left to your last response at my e-casa)
Again. You did it again.
Very beautiful and sad.
Making love to the moon...WOW
And that lying to Death...WOW
You and those ways of yours astound me.
I can see it all.
So beautiful!
oh, serene serrender... how I know thy words
what magic.... your writing is beautiful shay!
I love how you add your magic to everything you touch. You are a brilliant poet, my friend! xo
How sweet and sad and moving.
Reminds me of the "garland of freshly-cut tears."
Whooops, I think my "bloging manigir" just signed in under my account, which he (she?) is wont to do.
I agree with blue bunny, another masterpiece poem.
We are members of the Chang-O fan club you & I, Shay!
Aloha, Friend!
Comfort Spiral
Oh Moon faced woman...to be alright, and yet know that each night I see you in my dreams, out my window, in the night sky. I see you, feel you, hope you and your words will hold me still in my heart.
Shay...again...amazing!
So much love!
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This is lovely! And I like Daphne, too!
Lovely ..
Oh, another one. This is amazing. You've stolen my breath!
And sweetly lied that I would be all right.
Amazing images and thoughts in here, Shay, gently heartbreaking...
I feel like I'm in a Chagall-like fantasy.
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