Listen to the bells.
When they ring
In the early darkness,
They bring the snow.
I curl my bare toes around the top of the cold wrought iron railing
That circles the balcony
High above the headlights in the street
And the lovers on the sidewalk.
I am not young
And I never was beautiful,
But in my heart I carry the divine spark
And damned foolishness.
Spreading my arms as if I had wings,
I teeter in the shifting, chilly breeze.
I am losing the feeling in my feet.
I breathe in,
Breathe out.
I wave one arm, as if hailing one of the little taxis down below;
The sleeve of my red kimono makes me into a blooming rose...
I smell sweet,
I am temporary,
Barely here at all.
In my heart I carry the divine spark
And such damned foolishness--
The snow is pretty, all of it falling, earth-bound.
Hear the sound of the beautiful hollow shells and the strikers they need;
That's love, or something like it...
Listen to the bells.
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These lines back to back are absolutely brilliant:In my heart I carry the divine spark
ReplyDeleteAnd such damned foolishness.
You and all of us are both temporary and permanent. Sooo lovely. You, Tiger-friend write some serious beauty into the world.
xoxo
Your weasel-friend
ah but for a moment up there perched you felt free...am i interpretting it wrong or are you listening to gunshots again?
ReplyDeleteYou're so right, bells are only hollow shells without a striker. Loved this...cold, otherworldly and haunting.
ReplyDeleteFB....
ReplyDeleteDeep and Beautiful.
Just Like You.
G.
great picture of red and snow...then "that's love or something like it" --- nice write Shay....bkm
ReplyDeleteI love your line, In my heart I carry the divine spark and damned foolishness.
ReplyDeleteI've felt that, oh how true. lovely poem xo
Beautiful! I love your attention to detail. I can feel my feet going numb with cold as I read this. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteTeresa
My heart chimes resonate to your words - as always
ReplyDeleteAloha from Hawaii
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Liar, Liar, pants on Fire.
ReplyDeleteIt's not just me, but clear for all to see.
You are beautiful, Silly.
Still, a wonderful Poem :-)
Incredibly beautiful......I must read it again......
ReplyDeletep.s. my email is down - I can only access internet - and cant shut my computer down. Ack!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful!
ReplyDeletewell,i guess nobody is permanent at all darling, we are all that temporary and i believe it is all about that inside spark..:)
ReplyDeleteSTUNNING poem..love it :)
This is thoroughly haunting, and absolutely beautiful. The freedom it implies... I love it.
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you had me right there next to you, watching you, feeling the wind, hearing your thoughts.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and haunting...I adore it!
ReplyDeleteLoved...
"I am not young
And I never was beautiful,
But in my heart I carry the divine spark
And damned foolishness.
Wow!
You are a real pleasure to read and I always look forward to your writing.
Such gorgeous words.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written, and very visual, love the feeling of standing high up looking down below...such an emotional flow I myself had to take a deep breath. Stunning work! ~April
ReplyDeleteI can hear them ...
ReplyDeletei can hear them - and i'm right with you on that balcony - spreading my arms...wow shay - another fantastic piece!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteBut in my heart I carry the divine spark
And damned foolishness.
The dichotomy of who we are, so well expressed.
Is this a form poem? There seems to be a crescendo and then a dimunition.
Victoria
You definitely have that devine spark! Nice One Shot!
ReplyDeleteoh, teetering on the edge, barely holding on to this life, this damned foolishness! Keep carrying that divine spark, as it inspires more than you know.
ReplyDeleteThis is stunning absolutely...
ReplyDeleteThis stanza:
I am not young
And I never was beautiful,
But in my heart I carry the divine spark
And damned foolishness.
Wow do I get that seems to be the refrain of my life...
Love to you and please hug your baby deeply for me!!!
xo g
This is absolutely ethereal, but you add details here and there that give it a really sensual earthiness. I really like this, Shay.
ReplyDeleteIn my heart I carry the divine spark and damned foolishness.... what a nice way to say it. "Listen to the bells" I liked this one ... thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Shay, your poetry's taking it to another level. "But in my heart I carry the divine spark / And damned foolishness." Found it chilling in part, and also uplifting.
ReplyDeleteYou always have the absolute neatest and best imagery in your poetry, Shay. This poem is no exception. It's gorgeous! Sorry to be so late commenting - an insane day today.
ReplyDeletei missed you last week...but back to enjoy your wonderful work...picked up on baby jane...very good poem..cheers pete
ReplyDeleteWow Shay
ReplyDeleteThis poem makes a statement
the speaker seeking freedom to be...
I was waiting to see drops of red on the white snow - tho there is that read and white contrast looming
Excellent One Shot my friend
Did you hear about our competition that ends tomorrow???
Would love you to submit - if not there is next time
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oh.... what i would miss if i did not stop by....
ReplyDelete*sigh*
I hate the snow.
:)
but love your portrayal
lovely Shay.
ReplyDeleteI carry the divine. Great line. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteMag. Nif. I. Cent.
ReplyDeletexo
"I am temporary...barely here at all"
ReplyDeleteLove those lines. can definitely relate to those. another great one :)
Seasonal and mood effective work, excellent word-pictures that stick out in the mind.
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