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Monday, April 18, 2011
For The Thief With Stormy Hair
In the Night Garden, between trailing vines,
Against a wall of brick--
Dark brick--
The color of an imperfectly healed wild heart,
Find the Thief With Stormy Hair.
I turn my hands, and dark orioles rise from my palms,
Into a sky of black--
Rich black--
Like the shirt she wears, then loses like a dream,
Offering me the stars, and her dusky kiss.
I want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory,
Reach out and softly twine around her,
Bringing the rain every time we touch--
The orioles know,
My devotion is helpless, I go to her as if I were a spirit compelled--
I love her.
That is all anyone needs to know.
________
for STWIASD
photograph: Charlotte Gainsbourg
submitted for One Shot Wednesday
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Ah Shay. The orioles got me right away, and the vines and the Stormy Hair..I'm seeing aureoles of light around the half-healed hearts here, making them softly luminescent in the black of an otherwise common, dull night full of the forgotten, which these can never be. Just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe line about climbing up the brick like a Morning Glory, and when you "softly twine around her." What a gorgeous love poem...
ReplyDeleteI love "I want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory" and "I turn my hands, and dark orioles rise from my palms." How do you come up with such spendiferous wordlings?!!
ReplyDelete"the color of an imperfectly healed wild heart" speaks to me, wild and imperfectly healed as my old thumper is........and the orioles rising from the hands is sheer genius. Wowzers, you are an amazement a day, kiddo. The best writing ever.Beautiful, and wild.
ReplyDeleteShe is unthinkably lovely (and weird, which is always good).
ReplyDeleteHope all is wonderful!!
The very *first* thing I thought of when I saw that pic was, "Geez, Chrissie Hynde is looking fantastic!"
ReplyDeleteand that is all that really matters any way so...except the orioles...making them appear is a really cool trick...
ReplyDeleteI want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory ....what an image that creates. This is a luscious love poem.
ReplyDelete(She has stormy eyebrows too!)
Beautiful and kind of wistful.
ReplyDeleteYes, that's all anyone needs to know.
ReplyDeleteShay,
ReplyDeleteNow this is what I call a LOVE poem. I loved the reference to the dark brick being "The color of an imperfectly healed wild heart." That's so beautiful and I can imagine that color.
I also loved these lines,
"I want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory,
Reach out and softly twine around her,
Bringing the rain every time we touch--"
They made me sigh with joy that someone can write about love this way:~)
Only the lover can see a beloved this way, so richly on the outside and so deeply on the inside. - Brendan
ReplyDeletethis is really beautiful. i read it a couple of times, and each time the imagery grew stronger. very powerful and lovely.
ReplyDeletedo the thing with birds again...
ReplyDeleteagain...
this rocks so hard, Shay.
Genius.
Oh this post it really moved me and I love it I know these people in my heart and my life.
ReplyDeleteI love you
G
This breathes. So, so beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is so romantic. I love the imagery, especially the orioles, who know.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful dark layers to this poem-- sinuous and sensual-- loving the orioles as well. Would appreciate your take on my latest-- xxxj
ReplyDeleteI love the Orioles too! And this: "I want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory,/Reach out and softly twine around her."
ReplyDeleteAlso, I love Charlotte Gainsbourg and that's all anyone needs to know. ;)
It is a wonderful love poem Shay
ReplyDeleteglad to see that stars and kisses are being offered up...
hugs from the Moon
Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAnita.
sounds like you've been bewitched...
ReplyDeletea spirit compelled
ReplyDeleteAren't we all from time to time? :)
"I want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory," what a beautiful picture...
ReplyDeleteI want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory,
ReplyDeleteReach out and softly twine around her,
Bringing the rain every time we touch--
Incredible lines. Also, that imperfectly healed wild heart and the orioles, of course. Well, just everything.
The heat and yearning are palpable.
ReplyDeleteI want to climb the brick like morning glory too. And white star jasmine.
ReplyDeletexoxo
I want to climb the bricks like a Morning Glory... that is a line, too!
ReplyDeleteSuch passion is devoted here, Shay dear...
Ah Love love love
beautiful from beginning to end... the love and desire sweet. ♥ dani
ReplyDeletewoven words on the loom of your heart.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteOracle of the Feminine