The thing about the thing
we shot down from the roof,
was that the curve of the earth
matched the curve of its tooth.
From the head we made dog food.
From the hooves we made glue.
We took the bile and the backbone,
and from those we made you.
The heart hissed.
The hands curled.
The eyes were all milky,
sightless and pearled.
The brain rotted.
The ribs rang.
And the skull?
The skull sang.
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for Kerry's challenge at Real Toads
Love, love, and more love!
ReplyDeleteGorey Girl!
ReplyDelete(I loved it MORE :)
ALOHA from Honolulu
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Yikes! :)
ReplyDeleteum wow!
ReplyDeleteI was a drive-by kinda person until I reached your page :D
ReplyDeleteReally awesome poem, enjoyed it and read it again!
Will definitely check more of your poems =^.^=
btw, i didn't know wat chanson was and so youtube gave it away (i guess): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H1DpjXQUDsI
really cool!
ReplyDeleteSo THAT is how babies are made?!! Cool.
ReplyDeleteIt's a definite improvement on "the stork brought you and dropped you down the chimney"...
ReplyDeleteYou always bring something unique and unexpected to a challenge, Shay! Thank you for this arcane chanson.
Fun to read! YOU made me smile-I will have to read it again~
ReplyDeleteyou inspired the cantered grin, again, Shay.
ReplyDeleteYou Never. Fail. to amaze and entertain. Your brain is a treasure trove.
ReplyDeleteBrain Salad Surgery.
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly Quirky!!
Good Godfrey Daniels. Just exquisite, Shay. The sense of evil is almost overpowering, and the sheer immediacy *is*.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you, Shay, you are one hot tamale! This is cynical, funny, wickedly stirring... like that voodoo prompt last week... I cannot believe this - I just read it to Lex, and he hooted! Amy
ReplyDeleteAmazing. Sort of Chanson d'Amour without the amour.
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Perfectly dark-romantic, pre-Poe. Like it!
ReplyDeletePoe would sit at your feet, goo-goo eyed, I'm sure. :)
ReplyDeleteThis does fantastic things to my head! I love it!
ReplyDeleteFantastically creepy and wonderfully dark. Just my cup-o-tea!
ReplyDeleteThis is so dark, but I love it!!
ReplyDeleteThis is crazy. Amazing crazy! Words fail. I can really see someone singing this.
ReplyDeleteSomething a bizarro-world Marlene Dietrich might warble, and one hopes the accompaniment is atonal and Dada-esque.
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