I see them, surfer-ish blondes and fierce Tatars
ambling among the trowels and bushel baskets,
planting their tri-color flag in the petunias.
My brother has a train layout in the basement
set up on an old ping-pong table. I invite
one of the Russians to come down and see it.
He turns pale, looks funny, leaves in silence.
I go out to the garden shed with a notebook
like Lois Lane. I flip it open for an interview.
Why are you using our garden shed?
I stand there with my pad like a waitress.
At night the Russians sit around and smoke,
private thoughts burning under a suburban moon.
Don't they miss the Volga, the Dnieper?
Then in late June they are gone, leaving
only half a muffin behind like a broken heart
laid tenderly to rest amid the tall, fragrant sage.
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for the Word Garden Word List--Pages For You.
Music: In The Garden
I love that sad half muffin left behind like a broken heart!
ReplyDeleteI find this poem mysterious, as the heart is mysterious, fragrant with possibilities and frightening in intensity. Who hasn't felt the invader at the door, yet these fellows seem somehow more haunting than bloodthirsty. A beautiful and complex poem which leads us into the garden of earthly delights which can be so pathless and vast.
ReplyDeleteI just love your stories. I also love the voice in this poem--curious and bold. Maybe this poem is not meant to be romantic, but there is this swoon-worthy vibe I so dig about the close.
ReplyDeleteOh, but it is meant to be ;-)
DeleteThis was very clever. Seems recently you have been fascinated with Russians in prose and poetry. Smiles. I liked the Lois Lane illusion, an icon of our generation. Today she wouldn't have a notebook, but would have a phone! One wonders what the Russians were doing there anyway. They seemed harmless!
ReplyDeletevery interesting and captivating - like a picture hanging in a gallery, it contains many dimensions. Fascinating.
ReplyDeleteThat second stanza had me laughing -- what do Russian men in garden sheds know of a boy's toys?! -- all work, no play, but for a time, a garden to tend and a girl with stars in her eyes to wonder at before moving on, and on, and on. If ever a poem made me smile, this one did. You're a brilliant storyteller, Shay, and poetry of sweet little lies.
ReplyDeleteNow I'm singing Fleetwood Mac!
DeleteRussians in the garden shed, Russians in the strategy room, they're coming .. they're coming! Naturally, I thoroughly enjoyed your very creative poem.
ReplyDeleteAn amazing tale with an unfinished muffin!
ReplyDeleteI second what Sherry said, I love that image of half a muffin left behind like a broken heart. There was a slight feeling of menace as to what was going to happen so I only felt glad relief when I got to that last line :)
ReplyDeleteWill order my copy of Anna Karinina soon, but I need to know which translation, I want to find out why Russkies haunt your shed and trains make them see ghosts!
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