Right up to my front door, every day,
with her notes for my man.
Today she pays!
Today she--
"Duchess! Down! It's only the mail."
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for Mama Zen's Words Count feature at Real Toads. Today she wants conflict in 30 words or less.
Wednesday, October 3, 2012
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Perfect. :)
ReplyDeleteYour poem (she WAS a bitch!) was hilarious, Shay, and the introduction to the Chenille Sisters was much appreciated.
ReplyDeleteThanks for my first morning guffaw.
Haha! Gives new meaning to "Post Mistress".
ReplyDeleteA real LOL moment .. ah the life of a mail mistress
ReplyDeleteDon't shoot me, i'm only the messenger!
ReplyDelete~rick
Oh, this is perfect!
ReplyDeleteDoggie treats required ....
ReplyDeleteNice one! :)
ReplyDeletetoo cute!
ReplyDeleteHilarious! Hmmmm, perhaps more poems should be written from the perspective of animals. You're on to something here ...
ReplyDeleteThat was doggone funny!
ReplyDelete*guffaw* and woof!
ReplyDeleteMade me laugh! Made me guffaw! And that is a good thing!
ReplyDeleteOnly a cat could not be jealous, and you know how *they* are. This was actually pretty twisty for my poor befoozled brain--a lot going on in 30 words, but all of it hilarious.
ReplyDeleteThis is fun!
ReplyDeleteOh, Shay, you are too much.
ReplyDeleteLuv, K
Ha - it takes all kinds!!
ReplyDeleteHaha! It's NEVER only the mail!
ReplyDeleteAll the senses are meeting at the door.
And a tercet!
Love it! Oh how those doggies hate the mail man.
ReplyDeleteThis was clever and fun to read!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the smile :D
Yes, very clever and it gave me a smile too.
ReplyDeleteWhat drama!:)
ReplyDeleteHa! (Very funny poster too.) k.
ReplyDeleteThe conversational rant style...hilarious! Great conflict indeed! :)
ReplyDelete{{{giggle}}}
ReplyDelete♥
Great poem! Still smiling....
ReplyDeleteI love it. "Duchess, down!" Only you could pack so much into so few words.
ReplyDeleteA woman's always right too. Funny. :)
ReplyDeleteconflict and tension. anticipation and fore shadowing. cool. aloha.
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