--the birch, the pear, the maple--
"How can my heart be anything but an empty cup
Now that your leaves have all fallen
like the handsome musician from Heaven
or funeral cards from the hands of old women?"
"Look at you," replied the trees.
"We have spun you
from the loom of our beauty and the cruelty of our silence.
Just as you did in summer, you stand looking
as Jason did in the grove, when our fleece was
golden in autumn and stolen away in November."
I stayed for a long time,
so long that the snow
became hands on my shoulders like a mother's or a healer's.
The sky is as gray as cold water, the trees' bones
stand right to left like verses across a page,
antique, dignified, turned to benevolent mentors.
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for Dverse Poetics "Despite & Still" where Dora is hosting.
Music: Fleetwood Mac Bare Trees
And Judith Durham All My Trials
Can't hardly put into words the feeling this poem gave me, its emotion distilled into the pure silver of wisdom mingled with experience as in ""We have spun you/from the loom of our beauty and the cruelty of our silence." The penultimate stanza actually made me shiver, with cold and pleasure. How can they be more beautiful, these lines that seem as "antique, dignified, benevolent" as trees?! Another gem of a poem, Shay. I would say, "Wow," but ... well, "WOW!"
ReplyDeleteI am "wow" too. I felt so much as I read your words, I think it was the trees and their wisdom that falls upon us.
ReplyDeleteSo tender and beautiful Shay, and full of human truth and vulnerability. I love birch, the amazing minimalist tree. You gave them wonderful life in this piece. ✌🏼🫶🏼🎼
ReplyDeleteNo words. Just LIMITLESS admiration and appreciation for your vast talent. You should be famous. You are, with us.
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing piece of poetry! Thank you for that and the trees and all their wisdom
ReplyDeletePerfect right back at you, Shay! I love this conversation with trees – and the leaves falling ‘like the handsome musician from Heaven / or funeral cards from the hands of old women?’ How did you do that, make the poem change colour in the final stanza?
ReplyDeletePoint taken and kindly said: "We have spun you / from the loom of our beauty and the cruelty of our silence." A grove of elders going as we pray - "antique, dignified, turned to benevolent mentors." Going, I suppose, as we can choose to give ...
ReplyDeleteThe way you spun the story from that of trees reminds me a lot of some of the best poems by Tranströmer... I think this poem would be so well translated into Swedish.
ReplyDeleteWhat great images you have spun for us! Well done.
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DeleteI love the trees’ bones standing from right to left like verses across a page. They are indeed dignified mentors.
ReplyDeleteThese lines particularly struck me for some reason "..Just as you did in summer, you stand looking/as Jason did in the grove, when our fleece was/golden in autumn and stolen away in November.." What could better encapsulate aging than this, the slow roll downhill into a changed state where all inside is the same, all outside is different...The last stanza is my favorite, but the whole poem sings, and I love it.
ReplyDelete"Now that your leaves have all fallen ... or funeral cards from the hands of old women?" Wow. That caught a real edge for me.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful! I love the hands on the shoulders.
ReplyDeleteThis brought up all the feels, Shay. Time marches on and our lives are measured in seasons. Yours seems to be in a deliciously fruitful poetic one.
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