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Monday, December 16, 2024

Kitty (a pantoum)

 

Your cat has killed my singing bird
she sunk her teeth into its throat
and now, its every song deferred
it wears a reddened funeral coat.

She sunk her teeth into its throat
and left its body on the mat
an ornament for Charon's boat
does kitty give a damn for that?

She left its body on the mat
and licks her paws without a care
does kitty give a damn for that
or anybody anywhere?

She licks her paws without a care
her tail she'll switch in plain disdain
for anybody anywhere
she casually causes pain.

Her tail she'll switch in plain disdain
for having killed my singing bird
or casually causing pain
by any bloody song deferred.
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6 comments:

  1. Clap clap clap! An awesome pantoum. I do love this form. And the tale you told in it.

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  2. Hysterical! Brutal ~~ and I love it in spite of the murder.

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  3. I love your pantoum! Damn it, I love all your poems! :-)

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  4. This is a sharp scalpel in the mad doctor's kit, in a perfectly executed and rather tricky and difficult form. Kitty. like the Truth, is out there, and she and Honey Badger just don't care about the mess they make of people's dreams, lives and hearts. I have to mark the first stanza as especially amazing, as it sets out so perfectly everything that follows both in form and in message. I loved this one.

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  5. Most excellent Pantoum, every line and image perfectly integrated and echoing/pulling us forward. Our songs deferred, our red funeral coats.

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