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Thursday, May 1, 2025

Love Poem In Filigree & Hickory

 

I was sitting on a filigree bench
on a balcony
with no building behind it.

Then I was dressed in black
at a funeral for my own loneliness.
The sun was warm
and the priest was a peacock.

My love, my love,
in your thousands of scarves,
you were there, and we slept in the sky--
your arms silver, mine indigo.

I wound rose stems around the filigree
at the balcony's edge,
red blooms seeking the sun, which was a breast.

Then I was wearing this poem
at a wake for my own loneliness.
There were little cakes
with icing as white as a page.

You were there, my love, each of us inside the other.
Then I woke, and wept,
the breath filling my body
like smothering smoke from wet hickory burning.
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for What's Going On? "Last Night I Had A Dream"

Music: Emmylou Harris Hickory Wind 



9 comments:

  1. "at a funeral for my own loneliness" If only! But in a dream anything is possible. I picture Emmylou there (in scarves). Such a sad love song.

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  2. This is gorgeous. Superb. I am speechless.

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  3. What a lovely ethereal gathering of imagery untouchable like clouds.

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  4. "My love, my love, in your thousands of scarves..." I can't tell you how much I love that. This whole poem is such a voyage, so surreal and yet intensely vivid. Yes it has the floaty, dissociated feel of a dream where one is present but all seems to carry on automatically and one is powerless to influence it, but it also seems like a deep wish that is more real than any dream. This leaves a beautiful ache behind it, that makes any pain bearable in its luminous touch. Just stellar writing, Shay.

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  5. This poem really is a gift. I feel honored that you wrote it for this prompt. I can really identify with "funeral for my own loneliness." Wouldn't it be wonderful if this would be possible? Such sadness throughout, and the ending almost makes me weep too.

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  6. So flush with color and emotion, so dreamlike, so beautiful. "cried when I wrote it"--got chills when I read it.

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  7. "My love, my love,
    in your thousands of scarves ..." and the love of a thousand dreams too which makes the loneliness all the more palpable. Wonderful, Shay.

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  8. I just wish my soul to wear this poem in spite of its brokenness and smothering smoke it carries. A most beautiful reality-poem.

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  9. Sigh....those last two sets of lines took my breath away Shay!!!!

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