When the chill of the days
Suits my contrary ways,
I will tie my hair back,
Gather some things from my shed,
And work on my flower bed.
I can plant bulbs, or spread leaves across the ground,
And these grey days can be the most relaxing that I've found;
I will hold Lady Winter back,
Gather what I can from the final days of fall,
And be grateful for it all.
And if I lose my ring,
Well, I should have been wearing gloves;
I've lost so many things--
My youth, the years, and so many
Oh, so many
Loves.
But when the chill of the days
Matches my contrary ways,
I won't hold my emotions back;
I can blame the wind for my shiver and my tears--
It's just conditions of atmosphere.
And if I lose my ring
Well, I should have been wearing gloves;
I've lost so many things--
My youth, the years, and now also you,
My Love.
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It is very nice I love rhyming poetry!
ReplyDeleteLyrical piece. I've enjoyed reading it out loud, and, with a strum, would've loved to sing it with a guitar. It flows beautifully.
ReplyDeleteCheers.
Words that rhyme are amazing to me
ReplyDeleteI love the strength of this poetry
The weaving of words, the building of song
The rhythm the make us sing along
Across the distance all I can see
Is the power your words hold over me
great work, Shay! the rhythms are very compelling.
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone. Marty, I loved the rhyming reply! And welcome to the Word Garden, SL. :-)
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very visual. I can just imagine you out in the garden on a cold, grey day, planting those bulbs,thinking of someone else.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely rhythm and rhyme, pensive and nostalgic without being dark. Also so tactile, the feeling of the hands working on the flower beds, I can almost see and feel the soil on my hands.Al;so I like the repetition. And if you lose your ring:) there will be bulbs in spring, who knows... inside one of them there maybe another ring. I loved this Shay.
ReplyDeleteooo, Susanna and Wordcrafter, two of my very favorite gals to receive comments from! :-)
ReplyDeleteI strive to put my readers "right there" in a sensual way. Your kind comments let me know that I've succeeded, here at least!
And Wordcrafter, I love that, about the new ring in the spring; it appeals to this old romantic!
Just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteGet the gloves and use them, sweetie. Get so tired of you losing your rings!! *smile* Loved the poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to The Word Garden, Gretchen! I'm so glad you traveled here for a bit! :-)
ReplyDeleteNichole, sister mine, I know I am always and forever losing rings, aren't I? I guess that means that I would make a very poor lemur! I would have such a plain tail. *sniff*
ReplyDeleteMama Zen, welcome to The Word Garden! I'm pleased you liked my poem. :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderfully full, like life a bittersweet contentment in the
ReplyDeletevoice. You're the maiden of
repetiton shayfire.
oo thank you, Cynthia. I am fond of it, but it has to be done just so to work. ;-)
ReplyDeleteBeing a long time gardener this struck interest throughout your words. Nice...
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it, George. Welcome to the Word Garden!
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