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Saturday, December 3, 2011

Fly Girl

Fly Girl say,
Whoa yeah--
If you lyin
If you lyin
She know it.
Fly Girl see
Twenty-four of everything,
And if you hustlin that hard
You sure enough sellin bullshit.
Don't think
Don't even think
Fly Girl don't know it.


Fly Girl look
Right into your eyes,
And anything you are
Shine back multiplied.
She hip
She fly
She see twenty-four of everything
Two dozen times in each big eye.
Stop lyin
Stop lyin
You might fool your mama, or fuck with the man,
But Fly Girl don't play that.
Fly Girl understand.
_______


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24 comments:

  1. CloudiaDecember 3, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    yeah she do-




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  2. Brian MillerDecember 3, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    two dozen times in each big eye...ha...nice strong voice thru this...too bad we all cant see thru bullshit...

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  3. author.nara.maloneDecember 3, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    I need me some Fly Girl powers. :) Loved the rhythm in this.

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  4. ClaudiaDecember 3, 2011 at 5:07 PM

    i wouldn't want to have fly girl powers... enough to see life's bullshit once..ha.. fine write shay

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  5. UnknownDecember 3, 2011 at 5:14 PM

    Fly girl don't care.
    Fly girl don't give a shit.

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  6. Rosemary Nissen-WadeDecember 3, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    Oh, I just fell in love with Fly Girl. And love the 'voice' in which the poem is told: perfect!

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  7. LolamouseDecember 3, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    and if Fly Girl get pissed, she'll infect your food with dysentery!

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  8. hedgewitchDecember 3, 2011 at 5:59 PM

    Amen, amen, and I love that song--yours and the vid. Also love lLolamouse's observation, the big eyes, and the pic is cool too. -hopefully Fly Girl will use her powers only for good.

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  9. ScarletDecember 3, 2011 at 6:08 PM

    I think I have a new superhero.. Fly Girl~

    Enjoyed this Shay ~

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  10. MaryDecember 3, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    Ah, this was special. I wonder if Flygirl will eventually have Twenty-Five, Twenty-six, Fifty-five, Fifty-Six, and so on! Hope she keeps her superpowers forever.

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  11. HelenDecember 3, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    For sure, I'm not goin' to be crossin' Flygirl anytime soon.

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  12. JennyDecember 3, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    I think you're on to something here!

    Can you draw comic book style illustrations by any chance?

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  13. TALONDecember 3, 2011 at 10:00 PM

    Sometimes I feel like my glasses are getting to that magnification level ;)

    Fly Girl is wicked smart!

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  14. AnonymousDecember 3, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    she fly ♥

    you fly ♥

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  15. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 3, 2011 at 11:04 PM

    I love Fly Girl, and the way cool photo......

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  16. Kerry O'ConnorDecember 3, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    Trust you to invent your own super-hero!

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  17. Dave KingDecember 4, 2011 at 4:36 AM

    Can't say adequately how much I like this perfect match between form and content - and both and reader... this one, at least.

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  18. LynnDecember 4, 2011 at 8:35 AM

    A supergirl. :)

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  19. Maude LynnDecember 4, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    I love it! Rock on, Fly Girl!

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  20. ellen abbottDecember 4, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    Like!

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  21. SheilaDecember 4, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    cool.

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  22. ✿December 4, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    Girl, I love a little Cajun. :)

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  23. Cathy FeasterDecember 4, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    I think I'd like a little of FlyGirl's power :)

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  24. MargaretDecember 5, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    But Fly Girl don't play that.

    In other words... "the bullshit stops here!"

    I linked up too late, but in case you like adult comics... you might like this:

    A Fable Twist

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