Whoa yeah--
If you lyin
If you lyin
She know it.
Fly Girl see
Twenty-four of everything,
And if you hustlin that hard
You sure enough sellin bullshit.
Don't think
Don't even think
Fly Girl don't know it.
Fly Girl look
Right into your eyes,
And anything you are
Shine back multiplied.
She hip
She fly
She see twenty-four of everything
Two dozen times in each big eye.
Stop lyin
Stop lyin
You might fool your mama, or fuck with the man,
But Fly Girl don't play that.
Fly Girl understand.
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two dozen times in each big eye...ha...nice strong voice thru this...too bad we all cant see thru bullshit...
I need me some Fly Girl powers. :) Loved the rhythm in this.
i wouldn't want to have fly girl powers... enough to see life's bullshit once..ha.. fine write shay
Fly girl don't care.
Fly girl don't give a shit.
Oh, I just fell in love with Fly Girl. And love the 'voice' in which the poem is told: perfect!
and if Fly Girl get pissed, she'll infect your food with dysentery!
Amen, amen, and I love that song--yours and the vid. Also love lLolamouse's observation, the big eyes, and the pic is cool too. -hopefully Fly Girl will use her powers only for good.
I think I have a new superhero.. Fly Girl~
Enjoyed this Shay ~
Ah, this was special. I wonder if Flygirl will eventually have Twenty-Five, Twenty-six, Fifty-five, Fifty-Six, and so on! Hope she keeps her superpowers forever.
For sure, I'm not goin' to be crossin' Flygirl anytime soon.
I think you're on to something here!
Can you draw comic book style illustrations by any chance?
Sometimes I feel like my glasses are getting to that magnification level ;)
Fly Girl is wicked smart!
she fly ♥
you fly ♥
I love Fly Girl, and the way cool photo......
Trust you to invent your own super-hero!
Can't say adequately how much I like this perfect match between form and content - and both and reader... this one, at least.
A supergirl. :)
I love it! Rock on, Fly Girl!
Like!
cool.
Girl, I love a little Cajun. :)
I think I'd like a little of FlyGirl's power :)
But Fly Girl don't play that.
In other words... "the bullshit stops here!"
I linked up too late, but in case you like adult comics... you might like this:
A Fable Twist
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