in the breeze, the beach grass waves--
but can only stay;
in the breeze, the lake waves move--
but can only leave;
and always,
the light.
my dearest heart, i can only love you--
by snow, by summer,
by day, by night;
my devotion and this poem, yours alone--
whether it is wise,
whether it is right;
and always,
the light.
_______
for Real Toads' Friday prompt
so the light and your love is constant...i can live with that...smiles.
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I love this conciseness.
ReplyDeleteAnd Miss 'Things of the Mind' - honest!
Aloha from Waikiki
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Oh so beautiful. Anyone who is loved by the person who penned these lines is very very lucky! I especially love "and always the light"......beautiful.
ReplyDeletei ADORE your love poems! {sigh} i wish i could write something like this to my Love.
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The grass and water in waves - an ebb and flow, a light to guide and a constant heart... deep sigh...
ReplyDeleteThese words go straight to the top of my "One Day A Tattoo" list:
my dearest heart, i can only love you--
by snow, by summer,
by day, by night
Nicely done. Yep. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThis light also emits warmth.
ReplyDeleteYour words are soft and caressing.
Graciass!
Beautiful !
ReplyDeleteA lovely love poem! Simple expression is the best here. (And that photograph is gorgeous!)
ReplyDeleteShay--Your poems---whether they are love poems or not---are a constant source of pleasure and pain (envy) for me.
ReplyDeleteIt is what it is, indeed. Another softly tender poem of the heart, and there can never be too many of those; each one coming from you is as individual as a snowflake.
ReplyDeleteThe first lines about beach grass waves and lake waves...lovely!
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Critter Alley
This has an exquisite softness to it. Truly beautiful.
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An elegant and light (and always the light) touch. So lovely. I'll be sure to remind you that you have no interest in things puerile when they appear in future posts!
ReplyDeleteLove the repitition and constancy of the light... very symbolic.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and sad, Shay.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful, Shay.
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeletelove everything about this post
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