just like I knew you had guts--
pretty, guileless ones
that fell off the turnip truck of your silly white bones
and onto their points, like ringers.
You knew I breathed fire,
just like I knew you breathed smoke--
trying to make yourself into an ethereal angel,
soft and white, impaled on a stick
and turned to ashes right under my nose.
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image by Lolamouse
for Real Toads weekend mini-challenge
"Misunderstood" memories, thanks. "Tempered" memories, too--O how some thrive on being wounded!
ReplyDeleteBut is the balance at the end? No...feels as victory of one...
ReplyDeleteThat's one fiery disposition!
ReplyDeleteWow .. sounds like a match made in heaven (or hell.)
ReplyDeleteOMG, "impaled on a stick and turned to ashes". Killer. It hit me in the heart. Poems just dont get any better than that.
ReplyDeleteWow this is one heavy hitting love story! Love hurts
ReplyDeleteI think the Dr. just ran out of the room screaming for help...
ReplyDeleteWhoa, Fireblossom, this is scary-bad karma.
ReplyDeleteExcept for the turnip truck, which made me laugh. I haven't heard that expression in a long time.
K
I'm glad someone sees the dark side to these pictures. This is a brilliant interpretation!
ReplyDeleteMy Theme Song!
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
=^..^= <3
Love this song. I can't believe you played this!! My theme song from the eighties. cool version.
ReplyDeleteSeems there was a lot everyone knew but they pressed on regardless.
ReplyDeleteYour room is ready on the psych ward, Shay! A few weeks of intense therapy and a lovely cocktail of meds and you should be good as new!
ReplyDeleteSeriously, I love how you brought the contrasting colors of the inkblot into the structure of your poem. The images are scary intense. Those last two lines are killer!
Thanks for playing!
Dazzling, stunning, wicked images, and so much personality in the voice--just brilliant, Shay, in every meaning of the word.
ReplyDeleteFire and brimstone in your words...
ReplyDeleteWow, damn, and wow.
ReplyDeleteNo one dark quite like you. :-)
ReplyDeleteimpaled on a stick
ReplyDeleteis about the feeling; you are expert at pointing the sharp end in the softest spots
You took it by the horns!
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