I like your green shirt.
You wear it out at your hips,
and undone at your throat
to the perfect balance between promise and secrecy.
I like your glasses.
Your dark hair sometimes rests on the place
where the bow meets the frame,
and curves around it in a way that just undoes me.
Though I love them on you,
how I long to remove your shirt,
--gently--
your glasses
--gently--
with fingertips and long kisses.
Tonight my sleep will be slow in coming,
for thinking of you, your name, and these desires.
Then, in the silent hour, I will dream of pine forests
and streams that bend to reflect the stars.
_______
MMMMMMMMMMM!
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
=^..^= <3
another sigh...
ReplyDeleteLovely, especially the ending.
ReplyDelete... joining the chorus of sighs.
ReplyDeleteIncredibly beautiful, Shay.
Oh, so lovely.
ReplyDeletemmm. imagist? who cares! it is so perfectly paced and placed.
ReplyDeleteI have the same weakness for women with pixie haircuts. Go figure...
ReplyDeleteI especially love the last two lines as you know me - I prefer the woods to human lovers:)
ReplyDelete"to the perfect balance of promise and secrecy" love that...beautiful, sensual
ReplyDeleteI prefer stinky shirt of my daddy !
ReplyDeleteMom said I am sick.
That's why my dad love me so much. Unconditional love..MOL
xoxo
Love flows through your words like a stream through a green meadow...
ReplyDeleteI love the poem, I even love the labels ("close as your next breath").
ReplyDeleteso romantic
ReplyDeletethe perfect balance between promise and secrecy...That is so well put, I had to single it out.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you guide your reader into the experience of this poem
Wow, this is so incredibly romantic and real... When in love, I seldomly sleep and my dreams only take me to happy places....
ReplyDeleteexquisite longing...
ReplyDeleteGorgeous imagery, Shay.
ReplyDeleteIt had to be a Green shirt?
ReplyDeleteWow, wonderful, sensual and vulnerable. Exquisite.
ReplyDeleteSo tender.
ReplyDeleteThe whole piece is awfully fine, but the final stanza is flat-out powerful, lyrical and romantic in the best sense of the word. None of needs apology, mind you--but that's finishing on a high note.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous piece of writing, Shay girl, but the last two lines speak to my heart.
ReplyDeleteLuv, K
This is so slowly sexy! Damn!
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