I listen to every word you say,
but all the time, I can't stop thinking about your lips.
I want you closer. No...closer.
I want to wrap myself around you,
and bury my fingers in your hair and kiss.
I want you in my arms, my bed, my life.
Meanwhile,
keep talking.
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That last line made me smile.
ReplyDeleteThis couldn't have been done any better!
ReplyDeleteThat last line was a kicker...and a keeper.
ReplyDeleteAs usual, I am jealous...(Of what? you ask coyly. Of your gift and because I'm NOT the object of your affection.)
The lips are moving, but you don't hear a thing...
ReplyDeletelove it.
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile! "Meanwhile, keep talking." Cackle.
ReplyDeleteNothing ambiguous about this one. It speaks for itself better than I could comment.
ReplyDeleteHeh...I laughed. Loved the last line. Oh, what goes on in the head, hidden from view, while the rest of the world blithely goes on about its business...
ReplyDeleteLet's hope there are no questions being asked or there might be trouble.
ReplyDelete53... TWO MORE WORDS ... and you would have made Galen a very happy man, Shay. :)
Ha. Love he last line. Very cool.
ReplyDeletecaptured perfectly, Shay
ReplyDeleteAh, and I just watched "The Way We Were Last Night." Hot and bothered all over again. :-)
ReplyDeleteHa Margaret!
ReplyDeleteMaybe I should send her an abacus?
Very exciting. I love the urgency.
ReplyDeleteFlash 55 - Round Red Robin 0001
Ha ha. :) Great ending!
ReplyDeleteThis is my day for smiling and laughing at the sites I've visited. I loved this writing, especially the way you ended it.
ReplyDeleteIt's funny I visited LaTonya Baldwin's site and saw you had been there. I loved your conversation about AFG:~)
Have a great weekend.
Sexy :) Love the twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteSexy :) Love the twist at the end.
ReplyDelete**but all the time, I can't stop thinking about your lips.**
ReplyDeleteLove! Xx
Oh I love this - could have written it myself!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Love it! Perfect.
ReplyDeleteBIG sigh and lots of nodding yes yes yes
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