Thursday, September 19, 2013

convo

I listen to every word you say,
but all the time, I can't stop thinking about your lips.

I want you closer. No...closer.
I want to wrap myself around you,
and bury my fingers in your hair and kiss.

I want you in my arms, my bed, my life.

Meanwhile,
keep talking.
__________

22 comments:

Lynn said...

That last line made me smile.

Mama Zen said...

This couldn't have been done any better!

Sioux said...

That last line was a kicker...and a keeper.

As usual, I am jealous...(Of what? you ask coyly. Of your gift and because I'm NOT the object of your affection.)

G-Man said...

The lips are moving, but you don't hear a thing...

TexWisGirl said...

love it.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This made me smile! "Meanwhile, keep talking." Cackle.

hedgewitch said...

Nothing ambiguous about this one. It speaks for itself better than I could comment.

HermanTurnip said...

Heh...I laughed. Loved the last line. Oh, what goes on in the head, hidden from view, while the rest of the world blithely goes on about its business...

Margaret said...

Let's hope there are no questions being asked or there might be trouble.



53... TWO MORE WORDS ... and you would have made Galen a very happy man, Shay. :)

Myrna R. said...

Ha. Love he last line. Very cool.

grapeling said...

captured perfectly, Shay

LaTonya Baldwin said...

Ah, and I just watched "The Way We Were Last Night." Hot and bothered all over again. :-)

G-Man said...

Ha Margaret!
Maybe I should send her an abacus?

Vanessa V Kilmer said...

Very exciting. I love the urgency.

Flash 55 - Round Red Robin 0001

chamomile sea said...

Ha ha. :) Great ending!

Sara said...

This is my day for smiling and laughing at the sites I've visited. I loved this writing, especially the way you ended it.

It's funny I visited LaTonya Baldwin's site and saw you had been there. I loved your conversation about AFG:~)

Have a great weekend.

Nara Malone said...

Sexy :) Love the twist at the end.

Nara Malone said...

Sexy :) Love the twist at the end.

myinnerchick.com said...

**but all the time, I can't stop thinking about your lips.**

Love! Xx

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Oh I love this - could have written it myself!
Anna :o]

Carol Steel said...

Love it! Perfect.

Daryl said...

BIG sigh and lots of nodding yes yes yes