Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Hooked

Dear

pretty

fishy--

I'm

smitten

to

the

gills.
____

8 words for Mama Zen

29 comments:

Sioux said...

Shay--THIS is why you're not "it." You hardly ever pause from your writing long enough to let us into your head.

However, if you are amused by the game, I'm going to revise my post--right now. Consider yourself tagged, and you can play if you wish.

cosmos cami said...

Love it!

Mama Zen said...

Perfect!

Kerry O'Connor said...

And you went with 8 words too!! Lovely picture, with words to match.

grapeling said...

Zounds! expertly casted words that leave us wriggling

Susan said...

What a line!

Lolamouse said...

Shay,
I 8 this one up!

hedgewitch said...

Short and str8.

Marian said...

aaargh! (that was my strong and abiding phobia of fish hooks screaming)

TexWisGirl said...

too cute.

Sam Edge said...

nailed it

chamomile sea said...

It takes a mermaid to catch the one holding the pole.

Kay L. Davies said...

Fabulous! Finding an inspirational photo and then writing eight words to it...brilliant!
You definitely rock, Shay.
K

Fireblossom said...

Geez, I was sleepy and in a hurry this morning...it should have said (and now says) "I'm smitten to the gills" rather than "I'm hooked". it reads much better now, I think, with the pretty/fishy/smitten/gills "i" sounds repeating throughout.

Susie Clevenger said...

I love it!! Leave it to you to be so creative!!

Margaret said...

Of course you would go for the challenge of 8! (so did I) I'm either lazy or a genius. (you are a genius :)

Debi Swim said...

OH, wonderful!

Helen said...

Hooked, lined and sinkered ~~ you can do no wrong.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

What you can do with eight words. OMG. I givvup for tonight. LOL.

HermanTurnip said...

Wow...way to pack a punch in just eight words! Was this part of a challenge?

Lynn said...

Wow! I'm impressed.

Cloudia said...

See, now this is MY speed!


ALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
=^..^= <3

myinnerchick.com said...

Less is more.

LOVE!

Daryl said...

perfection!

G-Man said...

If it looks like a fish
And swims like a fish
Does it taste like a fish?
Just askin.....

sharplittlepencil.com said...

Eight words. And goddamn, you nailed it! Amy

Sioux said...

Shay--Check out penandprosper.blogspot.com. Jennifer shouted out your book...

De said...

NICE.
I almost went with 8 words. Now I'm glad I didn't.
Perfection.
(And that's besides the fact that I loooove all things mermaid.)

LaTonya Baldwin said...

Now why you gotta tell all my business? lol