Eleven swans with one
voice brought a warning,
delivered in a dream.
"Your love is sick,
dying. Her bones are
stems. Her hair, thorns."
Each swan carried a
bloom. I followed, eleven
miles. Behold, my love:
In the earth, stems.
On the earth, roses.
_______
A quadrille for Wednesday Muse.
Wow. In the esrth stems, on the earth roses. So you express your love in an interesting way. Swans...odd birds.
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorites. I love black swans.
ReplyDeleteYou had me at 11 swans with one voice! Simply breathtaking!!
ReplyDeleteSpare, haunting piece. I really like it.
ReplyDeleteEven your DREAMS are to die for. This is gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteWhen a poem opens the door to a dream, it should do it just like this. Everything remains bizarre and unexplained as it should, yet the heart feels a resonance and meaning. A lovely, perhaps even perfect, quadrille.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing. I can feel the magic simmering in this.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful recollection of what was. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThis seems oddly eerie, yet lovely. Black swans are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteRemarkable write! Love it.
ReplyDeleteFabulous, Shay . . :)
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