Poetry and such like.
Dreamy and romantic... love the 8 letters in "I love you"... thanks for participating.
8 lines, too, along with a nice little rhyme scheme.Short and sweet, Shay.
I love it, Shay. Especially the 'fix your lips'--that adds at least 60 seconds to this quickie. ;_) Very creative and sharp take on a timed prompt.
Very nice!I love the line, "eight letters in I love you."XPS- I never thought about Spring being madness. Like a madness of growth and bursting. Hmmm... might have to include that in some writing somewhere. :)
lucky 8's Shay!Aloha from Waikiki;Comfort Spiral > < } } ( ° > ><}}(°>
In less than a minute, you have created a ruby-red gem here. This is such a witty response to the prompt!Thank you for sharing your work on Real Toads.
A lovely snippet - brilliant in one minute! I like the way you display the poem.
Way the best. 'Nuff said!
Excellence times eight !
Whew, that was quick but very good ~
You remind us all how pleasing a quickie can be! ;)
That's one hot minute!
amazing that you wrote this in a minute, Shay! LOVE it! ♥
Brilliant. This must be what is called "a New York minute". Tells a whole story, with such wit and economy. Fantastic writing! I didnt even try. It takes me a minute to defog my glasses, and defogging my brain is no longer possible. Hee hee.
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