and leave the winter to its dreams
of fools such as my love and I.
In your eyes Provence does lie--
false Spring is never what it seems
when Mistral sings the lullaby.
The ring is left to rust and die
by drowning pool or icy stream
while scudding clouds above it fly.
Your wind has temper come alive
to kill the bud or turn the cream
and howl unchecked to Italy.
So comes the Mistral, mad with spring
My love, destroying everything.
_______
for Dverse Meeting the Bar "Wild Wind."
It is said that madness occurs particularly often in the Spring. I believe it.
Oh this flows beautifully, with love taken by the winds. Beautifully written and joy to read.
ReplyDeleteLove this! Especially howling all the way to Italy.
ReplyDeleteNever experienced the Mistral but your poem describes its maddening effects wonderfully and lyrically...
ReplyDeletethis is one of my favourites Shay - you brought the Mistral alive in metaphor as well and the Trilonet rhymes are so good
ReplyDeleteBeware the mistral's snappy castanets! But who could resist her in a such a tight-fitting trilonet like this?
ReplyDeleteMadness du jour, served with a delicate sprig of rhyme and a rushing wind of perfect cadence. Superb craftsmanship in a very demanding form yields a poem that haunts as it blows through us like a knife.
ReplyDeleteOh, this stirred me like a spring wind. The keen pen of Ms. Fireblossom shines even in this form poetry.
ReplyDeleteWhat Joy said. As wild as a November wind.
ReplyDeleteI really love this with a wonderful classical feel to it, it is so far until spring, but the rush of love is much the same, I had to read it aloud since the cadence and rhyme were so perfect.
ReplyDeleteGreat. Like HW says, classical not just because of the sonnet form. Spring with so much capacity still to destroy what it has promised from the earth.
ReplyDeleteWhat a pleasure to read, Shay! Reads like a lullaby and like some classic lullabies has an undercurrent of threat and danger in the soothing rhythms and rhymes.
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