There were ceiling fans that made one think
that Baron Von Richtofen might fly in at any moment.
I wondered whether a man wearing coveralls had to climb
up on a ladder each morning
to heave the blades into motion.
They served a concoction of fruit, gin, crushed ice,
the low notes from Hernando's Hideaway, and who knew
what else. It tasted like children's party punch
but made our high perches start to pitch
on the rough seas beneath our jelly legs.
Down some white stone stairs, there was a blue pond
someone had stocked with mallards, as green and gold
as my jewelry. They were free to fly
but could never leave--the desert
would have turned them to cardboard.
We slept with scorpion nets. One night I dreamt
that a handsome man in a uniform of water lay with me,
told me my hair was good rope from India, and
that I had been a snake charmer
in a previous life. He kissed me and it stung.
Ah, love, there you are looking at me through your new
telescope, your young face behind the lens like an egg.
I gave up gin, and traveling, and most other things long ago.
Now I'm talking to you with my bird beak,
free to choose but forbidden to leave
except via packing box, to be sent by air mail over the dunes
to the oasis bar, c/o my younger self, cash on delivery, payable
in florins, code phrase "wing walker." The Baron will be there waiting.
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for Word Garden Word List--Across the River and into the Trees
Music: Hernando's Hideaway
What a sweeping landscape you convey - a pleasure to fly with you! Jae
ReplyDeleteOh, wow, what a stirring tale. I loved every line, reading with awe at how you spin your amazing tales. I love the talking with a bird beak, and the code phrase "wing walker". Simply wonderful.
ReplyDeleteReally a captivating tale! Wonderful atmosphere, and your song of choice "Hernando's Hideaway" definitely adds to the mood.
ReplyDeleteThis gave me Casablanca vibes right away and I really dig that aesthetically. And the Baron, bringing the tale back to WWI was neat, too, as this vignette has that whole Historical Fiction genre thing about it. I am a fan of historical fiction, so I enjoyed this poem very much!
ReplyDeleteagain and again, your writing gives me goosebumps. duckbumps? that final verse, but really all of it. ~
ReplyDeleteJust utterly wonderful. I love how you manage to get that exquisite balance between brilliant dry humour with an underlying dark side all the while. I am so here for it, that is my jam. Love all the images, the 4th stanza is my favourite.
ReplyDeleteI love how this one nails that Lost Generation vibe while telling subtly a more modern story of its own. I especially love the tension that you build at the end, starting with that amazingly vivid ad apt descriptive phrase "..your young face behind the lens like an egg..."and ending at an oasis of the mind where memory provides life support to all one's former selves. Solid, brilliant writing, Shay.
ReplyDeleteThere is so much in your poem to absorb, the visuals, the story telling, slipping into a memory. There is so much that makes a person who they are. This poem is brilliant.
ReplyDelete“ I had been a snake charmer in a previous life.” This is likely true,
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