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Thursday, February 13, 2025

Saint Agnes On The Bus

 

On a bus in the city
on a slush-spattered morning
St. Agnes rode quiet to her grave.
Her sister was praying
her ear buds were playing
a song that was slow, sad, and brave.

The driver was sleeping
on a cushion of roses
and the wheel was a garland of sand
St. Agnes was pure
as few ever can be
mending wounds with a gold rubber band.

On the streets there were dogs
and they spoke of a healing
that cures every creature entire
St. Agnes is holy
and her sister is humbled
by the cost such devotion requires.

The bus turned to ashes
and the souls of the riders
had to carry all the things they must learn
St. Agnes beheaded
her sister lamented
that glory, to be sweet, must be stern.
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8 comments:

  1. A ballad, Shay, which should be set to music. I love the setting of a city bus on ‘a slush-spattered morning’, and the image of a nun listening to music with ear buds. Even though I knew a little of St Agnes, that she was a virgin martyr and the saint of young girls, chastity and rape survivors, I was still shocked at the ending. And she was only twelve or thirteen when she was beheaded!

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  2. I agree with Kim - it is so musical, sung in a Dylanesque way but lovely just to read too

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  3. This is such a gorgeous piece of writing, Shay! I agree, it should be set to music. ❤️❤️

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  4. "The driver was sleeping
    on a cushion of roses
    and the wheel was a garland of sand"

    This imagery is going to stay with me for a long time, as will the whole poem. I love the way you tell a story, Shay.

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  5. I love the way you have personified in St. Agnes the idea of intense purity, healing, everyday beauty and the contradictions of the prosaic. The rhyme and form ( and closing lines) make it shine especially bright.

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  6. I love how you brought her to life in a modern setting, I had to read about her (and her sister), somehow the setting made me think of the rape story that happened in India a few years ago..

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  7. How full of promise and tragedy life is! And I read this ballad as a tribute and a lament to the ones who bravely ride through both "mending wounds with a gold rubber band."

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