Friday, May 8, 2009

Flash Fiction Friday



The succubus sits on a hill overlooking town, brooding. There were hikers. Now there aren't. Never disturb a hormonal succubus. She looks down and sees a smoke plume above Mulberry Place Mall. They must not have had the shoes Chloe wanted. Now that that God chick transferred to Danny's Too in Norman, it's love again.

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8 comments:

K said...

I'm feeling a little vengeful myself today.

pheromone girl said...

I feel bad for Chloe and her shoes. Excellent 55!

Riot Kitty said...

I've got to try this...

Shadow said...

pms?? succubus'???? nice 55!

G-Man said...

I just don't get women and their shoes. But I do indeed appreciate a good 55 when I read one. Thanks for FINALLY getting around to tell me you posted one....:P

Pouty Lips said...

"Never disturb a hormonal succubus." Ha-ha.

anthonynorth said...

Deceptively deep words.

Mama Zen said...

Shrieking, shrieking, shrieking with delight!