Hello my friends and welcome to another Word List! This time our source is an amazing novel by Louisa Young entitled My Dear I Wanted To Tell You. This title is taken from preprinted cards given to wounded English soldiers to send home. They read "My dear ____ I wanted to tell you", They then went on to say the man had been wounded, and the wounded soldier would then cross out either "slight" or "serious" leaving the other to describe his wound.
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Louisa Young |
The novel follows two couples, an officer and his pretty but shallow wife, and a pair of young lovers. The men both go off to the trenches while the women deal as best they can. WWI changes all of them profoundly. The book is marvelous, but also gutting. It's one the best I have ever read, but it also tore me up. So, recommended but with a caveat. It's not an easy story.
What we do here is to use at least 3 of the 20 words provided in a new, original poem of our own. Then simply link up, visit others, and enjoy your Sunday. This prompt remains active until next Sunday when I will post a new one.
And now, your List:
artistic
bird
bitter
blue
circled
egg
end
golden
hideous
letter
muddy
narrow
Paris
ribbon
scarf
shell
sugar
sweet
trifles
wards
Anyone writing "sweet as sugar" shall be driven into the poetic wilderness by a mob of angry pedants carrying torches.
Thank you Shay - I hope I managed to avoid the sweet as sugar rule! Jae
ReplyDeleteYou're cool, Jae!
DeleteSounds like a very good book!
ReplyDeleteIt was awesome. It's actually book #1 of a trilogy, but I have not read the others.
DeleteI will look for it!
DeleteThank you for the word garden that sprouts a variety of poems.
ReplyDeleteHey, we've got a regular greenhouse around here.
DeleteI ordered it on kindle and see she has another love story involving addiction.....they look good. I took a day off today. Back in the saddle tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteYou deserve a day off, Sherry! I love it that you ordered this book; I think you'll like it. The addiction one is a memoir about her partner, I think.
DeleteI stumbled over here from WordPress and have been enjoying your site & decided to give the list challenge a go. Thanks for the inspiration and the image of cutting edge technology and Magic Awake Juice. I blog under the oh so clever name of M.Oniker.
ReplyDeleteWithout the Magic Awake Juice, everything here would grind to a halt! Welcome, glad to have you!
DeleteSuch great choices of novel and words, Shay. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Dora.
DeleteI should read the book. I think this is the shortest poem I've written in a while. Thanks for the inspiration.
ReplyDeleteSometimes short is powerful. Nothing wrong with short.
DeleteThis book sounds like one I should add to the list of books I never find time to read (alas)...
ReplyDeleteI hear that! I have time, but sooo many books!
DeleteThere is some sweet and some sugar in my poetic brew, but hopefully not sweet as sugar.
ReplyDeleteYour poetic brew is always like baby bear's porridge, Jen.
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