Shhh
you said.
Fingertips
Like a memory
Through my hair
Shhh.
Will,
Stubborness,
What use are they
In the dark?
Like a pot forgotten
I overflowed
And could not contain
All that I carried.
I had got lost
And though there was the whole blank night,
I couldn't have thought
How to put things right.
Shhh,
you said.
Baby,
shhhh.
_____
Tuesday, June 15, 2010
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16 spoke through the ouija:
Shhh
"Fingertips
Like a memory
Through my hair
Shhh." -- I sighed reading those lines. Beautiful, Shay.
I've said and heard those words so many times.
This was lovely.
Shhh,
jj
Oh shay, lovely. Really really good. Your writing rocks girl :)
yes
When you overflow onto this page, it's always good.
How beautiful...
shhh ... indeed ... memories .. ahhh
Lovely and soothing. shhh...
shhh...
I wonder if you will write a poetry book someday.
It sounds creepy when a Harley man like Mac says "shhhhh" It's like he's about to offer you some candy and do unmentionable things to you.
hold me? so sad, yet blessed all in one.
Gentle. Loving, caring. I so like it.
This says so much. And, says it beautifully.
It's difficult to type with Earl Grey's tail on the keyboard!
LOL @ SeƱorita's comment. Btw, I love your book, Shay. When will you write another one and include this gem in it, amiguita?? Shhh, don't tell me...surprise me!! ;)
me likee!
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