Here, drink this.
It won't do a damn thing.
In the morning,
Forget the sky.
She will shake the sun out of her hair,
No matter how much you chart houses, trines, oppositions,
At the start of the day--
Fever.
At the end of the day--
Fever.
Distraction means nothing.
Tease the boys until they jump through flaming hoops;
It's no use.
She knows your tarot.
She has your number.
She reads your palm and all the rest of your ready skin,
With her nails on your pulse point
And her tongue tracing your heart line,
Until you come back to your
Senses,
Back to your so-called
Right mind.
Stop wasting time.
The world will not end if you kiss her.
The world will not end if you go down the valley to find her heartbeat,
But it might
If you don't.
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picture from "Picnic At Hanging Rock"
poem written for magpie 27 (because Willow's picture had me thinking about hidden waterworks. *blush*)
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I love the enigmatic Picnic at Hanging Rock. I think this piece is calling for some music. They're fabulous lyrics.
ReplyDeleteWow, excellent.
ReplyDeleteThis enigmatic piece made my mind chase meaning through many places but I didn't blush. Should I? :-)
ReplyDeleteTease the boys indeed! After reading this I don't want to come to my senses: Just want to keep the world from ending!
ReplyDeleteTerrific poem!
Rick
quit wasting time!
ReplyDeleteYour words are so effective, and the picture really enhances mood. Thanks for this.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, Boonsong
Muy bien!
ReplyDeleteWonderful - it would make a fine song!
ReplyDeleteThat motored Fireblossom..va va va vrooom...with truth.And vulnerability.Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGood advice to any age.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
You are so persuasive in the best of ways, Chica! Love it and that movie is so freaky ("Picnic at Hanging Rock"). I thought it was going to be predictable, but no. I didn't love it but I loved that it wasn't predictable.
ReplyDeleteCuriously evocative. I like it, a lot.
ReplyDeleteOoh! Hot. I loved it. The world might indeed end :)
ReplyDeleteNice! I totally agree with Willow. . . this would be one fab piece for a song, i would listen to it all the time. perfect
ReplyDeleteso if she weighs as much as a duck...
ReplyDeleteNo seriously... this would make a great 60's retro song. I like!
"Forget the sky.
ReplyDeleteShe will shake the sun out of her hair,
No matter how much you chart houses, trines, oppositions,
At the start of the day--
Fever."
Loved this even more after looking up the meaning of "trines'. It is always good to have a new word for the day.
In moments of deep emotion it does feel as if the world will end ..
ReplyDeleteAnd I knew, just knew that photo was from Picnic at Hanging Rock .. awesome
No, the world won't end if you kiss her.
ReplyDeleteI loved the ending of this one:~)
ReplyDeleteOh, I see you wrote it for Magpie. Another person I know writes for Magpie, Linda. She visits my site...she generally writes short stories.
'she knows your tarot' ... 'she has your number' ... I love the feel of those words. Very nicely written! And yes, it could be put to music.
ReplyDeleteyou are truly a master of words - like the last line a lot..the world will not end if you go down the valley to find her heartbeat, but might if you don't
ReplyDeleteYes, it might, if you don't.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed that.
ReplyDeleteBrava
ReplyDeleteWarm Aloha from Waikiki :)
Comfort Spiral
OH! Kissin' Kissin' that's what I've a been a Missin'...
ReplyDelete:) mmmm... came by for a fix, leavin' never disappointed!
Kiss her already! So fun, reminds me of boys I dated when I was young.
ReplyDeleteOh awesome, Shay!!
ReplyDeleteJust awesome. Well, not JUST awesome -- so many other good things too.
xo
Hmmm knowing Shay she could take this to an unexpected end.
ReplyDeleteNice one dear
you never disappoint
smiles from the Moon
Fireblossom this is amazing writing! You always have something unigue and wonderful to contribute. I always look forward to more!
ReplyDeleteWhatever made you write this wonderful poem..thanks..see what a prompt can do!!
ReplyDeletePicnic at Hanging Rock...one spooky movie!
I felt the pounding pace - the sense of urgency to grasp the moment!
ReplyDeletebig grins...skipping to the valley...
ReplyDeleteBravo fireblossom, wonderful done - love those lines "She has read your tarot, she has your number".... reminds me of youthful hot days....bkm
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