You would not have sensed it coming;
Wouldn't have noticed the tang in the air...
You would have been thinking,
Have someone mow by the roadside--
Those sunflowers, really weeds,
Level them.
Line up the fence posts,
Equidistant.
Have it done by three--
Then on to the next thing.
I have turned away from you so many times,
I am sister to them
When the clouds start to circle.
It seems a random thing,
This destruction;
But perhaps there is the hand of God in it.
When you are gone,
I will lie down by the roadside, among the sunflowers;
They will bend over me like lovers.
I will receive them, and we will say to each other,
"How beautiful you are;
How perfect."
We will care not at all
For plans,
Plotted lines,
Or much of anything besides lazing in the ditches
At the messy, unincorporated edge
Of Eden.
________
I love this.
ReplyDeleteThe unincorporated side of Eden - that is great. :)
ReplyDeleteI love those sunflowers.
ReplyDeleteLike Lynn, "At the messy, unincorporated edge
ReplyDeleteOf Eden," just jumped out and grabbed me.
Loved it, Shay.
I would love to lie down with the sunflowers for all eternity. Love them and love this poem, amiguita!
ReplyDeletethey will bend over me like lovers...
ReplyDeletei love your poetry.
thank you
for stopping by my place...
Ditto w/MZ!
ReplyDeleteVery touching !
ReplyDeleteBut right now I have the following line from your poem stuck in my head.
"They will bend over me like lovers."
Who are they ? You mean I could have more than one ? Oh you rule !
loved the whole thing, and a beautiful end. I love where i go with your poetry!
ReplyDeleteAn enchanting analogy - and sunflowers are my favourite flower too. Thanks for this.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day, Boonsong
Beautiful poem...
ReplyDeleteThese lines are especially stunning to me:
"When you are gone,
I will lie down by the roadside, among the sunflowers;
They will bend over me like lovers.
I will receive them, and we will say to each other,
"How beautiful you are;
How perfect."
(and I just sent you an invitation to my blog through blogger)
Nature will endure long after mankind passes from this realm.
ReplyDeleteAnd you are perfect, just the way you are FB. Never let anyone tell you different.
Beautiful poetry and the flowers...
ReplyDeleteYeah baby! Gorgeous.
ReplyDeletexo jj
a True Poem.
ReplyDeleteI salute your genius
Aloha from Honolulu :)
Comfort Spiral
you stand out like those marvelous flowers in all their glory
ReplyDeletebeautiful Shay
moon glow