Reanimated Lavender Granola Switchblade Nun rides again.
Wednesday, January 19, 2011
1909
It was a long way to go
To the friend's house,
So she,
Hattie,
And Marjorie
Dressed themselves like cloth bells
And swung with each step
Through the snow.
She had not slept much the night before--
When the fireside is warm
And the wine is good
There are more uses than one for a lady's scarf;
But today she talks of cobblers and cows
To Hattie
And Marjorie
Because, after all,
Friends, too, can warm a woman's heart.
It was a long way to go,
From the morning to the evening--
She grew tired
And her feet got cold.
Eventually, her friends
Hattie,
And then Marjorie,
Went their own way into night across the snow.
I cannot see my foot tracks anymore, she thought,
No helpful light yet drifting from the sky;
I cannot feel my fingers,
Nor my slowly quieting heart...
I cannot feel...
I cannot feel...
I.
________
for Magpie 49
Dedicated to my grandmother, whose name was Marjorie. You are missed.
_________
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O Shay this is a beautiful tribute to your grandmother...friends had to be their lifeline in the day...they were held back in so many ways...these were strong woman ...again beautiful....bkm
ReplyDeleteA mix of eerie and serene that shouldn't mix but does...and for some reason seems like the end of one tale and the beginning of another. Footsteps in the snow...leading to a mystery.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was very lovely. I liked how the story flowed. Very nice. :-) Nice to meet you...through both Poets United AND Magpie.
ReplyDeleteMs. Hedgewitch makes a keen observation ~ I also sensed the eerie vibe. This was intense.
ReplyDeletei also think this is a lovely tribute. your grandmother must have been so proud of you. it's in the remembering that holds our loved ones close to our hearts. i wonder if you really know what a brilliant poet you are? i hope so xx
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Brilliant form. And because I just lost my grandmother, this resonates with my own remembrance and nostalgia.
ReplyDeleteThank you Fireblossom.
the mention of the scarf has gotten to me...there in lies the mystery....
ReplyDeleteI think she was jilted and contemplated you know what
but went on to walk in the snow home with her friends then
left them to leave them all
(lost in the snow and died)
But if not the story...I enjoyed the hunt
Very lovely. Evocative, I was transported back in time.....loved the line "dressed themselves like cloth bells and swung with every atep" - only you could have written that!!!!! The ending is a surprise, and sad. Brilliant writing, as always.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully tragic.
ReplyDelete'Dressed themselves like cloth bells'
ReplyDeleteI like this. An enjoyable read.
Like cloth bells. I like that, too.
ReplyDeleteI was so excited to read the name Marjorie because that was the name of one of my mother's older sisters, who was a young girl in 1909. It is such a beautiful name...
ReplyDeleteYour poem held me spellbound, really. Beautiful.
i like the glimpse of these three friends, and not knowing more about them lets me do some of the imagining. cool.
ReplyDelete"Cloth bells" is so lovely. A Beautiful tribute to your grandmother, Shay. I know she is smiling.
ReplyDeleteI always wondered how women in their long dresses coped with walking in the snow:~)
ReplyDeleteThis story is mysterious and loving. I also wondered about the reference to the scarf and loved it when you said, "Friends, too, can warm a woman's heart." So true.
I imagine your grandmother was someone special because she couldn't be anything less with you as her granddaughter:~)
An underlying mystery to be sure. But one fact there was the friendship that saw then through til...
ReplyDeleteExcellent word smithing as always Shay
Sad but lovely
ReplyDeleteGrandma would be so proud of Shay's way with words! I love this!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful tribute. You have a great way with words.
ReplyDeleteAll our grandmothers have been an inspiration in some way....this is a lovely tribute Shay! :-)
ReplyDeleteShay, this just "rings" with so much longing and beauty for Marjorie.
ReplyDeleteLovely, you :)
Once again, the 'feel' of your Magpie is echoed by mine on Alias Jinksy! :)
ReplyDeleteloved this one Shay.
ReplyDeleteLoved teh 'cloth bells' i.e. clothed belles?!
ReplyDeleteI could've sworn I already commented, but I returned to read it again and now I don't see that I did.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, the sadness of this one touches me. To be left without friends to warm your heart. To fade into the numbness of non-being. You write so beautifully and so well!
Loved it! A bit eerie... flowing from a serene embrace of friends... until the still of darkness stills ones heart.
ReplyDeleteNice tribute!