Tuesday, January 18, 2011
Beautiful Mess
I drew poppies
With red O.P.I.
On the white window sill
And your messy hair
As you slept
Looked like crow's wings
Spread
Across impossible
Joyful
Fairy tales.
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One Shot Wednesday
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24 spoke through the ouija:
smiles...i still believe in fairy tales...sweet one shot shay
Le sigh, lovely TIger-friend! Bogata blackberry is my favorite O.P.I. xoxo
I like to see things spread across impossible--makes it seem smaller. I almost have to go polish my nails now. (perfect 80's soundtrack as well.)
So beautiful and romantic. The black wings of hair like crows........lovely image.
Beautiful Shay...you had me with the OPI Red....blessings...I love OPI Red...bkm
the hair like crow's wings contrasted with the red nail polish is fantastic!
Ahhh, this feels really nice :)
these trails of your mind as truly beautiful!
:) Brought a smile across my face.
full of grace, really.
The song rocked, can't figure out what/who it reminds me of, which makes me appreciate it even more. After Googling OPI red, thought the poem beautiful. Love the playfulness and optimistic tone.
OPI Red - love those quirky names they have and it fits beautifully in your poem.
I Am Not A Waitress OPI Red or the signature OPI red? Inquiring Fashionistas need to know .. love this and the red font ...
I Am Not A Waitress. It's a fave of mine, Daryl. :-)
Love the colors Shay
Red black
No fairytale here
Well a noir one
You always throw a dead ringer
Hugs - moonless. (ok my iPad has a mind of it's own)
this fairytale did not go bad...white..black..red...loved it
You have amazing descriptive powers, Shay :)
I can see this so clearly . . .
Beautiful.
Very descriptive in so few words.
Pamela
I must google OPI red.
crow's wings, not crow's feet.
youthful exuberance!
Poppies, crow's wings--you've captured this moment so well. Beautiful.
a poignant picture in but few sweet words... "...like crow's wings/spread/across impossible/joyful/fairy tales." that says it all for me :)
Dear Fireblossom
Perfect imagery.. and the feeling was so fairytale like..
thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thoughtful words of love.
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