Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Storm Science
She is dark.
She is hidden.
She has a million sisters but is unique to her last ion.
I wake and listen.
She could care.
She is moon-ruled.
She could show herself a million places but has chosen my desire.
I open the window and breathe.
She sends out a charge.
I send one back.
It has been done a million times but this one shocks my heart and shivers my bones.
We could open the door,
But we kick it down.
I run into the night, first laughing, then urgent as I open myself, waiting;
She blows through me and I lift,
Burning,
Into the storm.
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photo by Metin Demiralay
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18 spoke through the ouija:
I like this Shay. Heat always rises taking one with it. passion is so hot it singes quickly and then erupts in flame.
"She could show herself a million places but has chosen my desire"--Nice, Shay! This poem is aflame with passion and its heat!
The poem goes so well with the photo you chose. Lovely.
'moon-ruled' would do it for me...
oh my.
and a big sigh.
"We could open the door,
But we kick it down."
YESYESOHYES!!! :D
"She is moon-ruled." - I love all that says and speaks of, Shay.
WOWZERS! "shivers my bones" indeed! So much energy in this poem. I love "she is moon-ruled".....and "I lift, burning, into the storm". A brave heart:)Fantabulous writing, as always.
Is that a spliff I see betwixt the lips of that hot woman on the side bar?
Oh and the poem totally soars!
burning into the storm..love this
I saw the photo and wasn't sure what we were in store for-- but your poem goes perfectly with it. Nice job. jj
Touche`
Thank you for your dear friendship here in the blog-world, Shay.
Please stop by today to share a special moment with me if you have the time. Warmly, c-
Comfort Spiral
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Powerful!
TIger-friend: I adore the open door followed my "open myself". Powerful imagery.
p.s. I just noticed your "I hate haiku". I always feel dim for not getting it. But I don't. I get you, I think.xoxo
Weasel-friend
Wild freedom and passion, well-paced and full of tension and emotion. I like the undertone of the necessity for destruction and denial of constraint in the image of kicking down the door when you could just turn the handle.
This feels so sweet and urgent. Really, really gorgeous.
Bring on the Storm !
Gotta love those moon ruled children :)
I can taste the passion the recklessness...
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