Poetry and such like.
Wow. Short and powerful.
Sheesh. Bad day?
Wow! Short and to the point, Shay. Very short, yet says so much!
very sad. very bitter. powerful words.and pop on over here and pick something up pleeeez...http://gsp-shadow.blogspot.com/2009/04/zombie-chicken-award.html
Fabulous... love the raw honesty. (((((((((Shay))))))))) love you more xxxx foxylete (todays word verification! lol)
I'm feeling a bit bitter myself today. I'm hoping some sweet tea will help. Really I just want to fly too.Have a great Wednesday.
Damn, I better remember not to fly north! ;)Dark, but as always, heartfelt and well done.
Wow, how amazingly stated in so few words...thank you!G
Maybe one of your most effective poems .. and it works perfectly with that photo ...
I love the image of boarding up the sky.
Do you need a hug?
I think you might need chocolate. That will help:)
I'll gladly accept the hug AND the chocolate, as well as all the very kind remarks. Thank you so much, everyone. PS--love you toooo, Kelly K. ;-)
Brave. Thanks for sharing.
Precise yet so deep!!! Fantastic!!!
I have something for you!
Strong impact with this compact photo. Love the words you chose to get the image across.
You are going to love me now that I went to a writing seminar yesterday, now I think I know what I'm talking about. Here goes: You used very few words but picked two words that carry heavy weight, expunge and die, and it packs a much bigger punch than if you had used 10 stanzas with all kinds of clever wording. Absolutely brilliant.
Board up the sky.Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay, Shay. You got it going on, in oh so many ways.xo
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