In my open shoulder bag,
the second dream
from my third night with you.
It is wrapped in satin taken
from the step of a tomcat on the sill in the dark.
That night,
clocks were lit and lined my book shelf like roosting dawn.
I was a caravan crossing your skin,
wearing borrowed Moroccan prayers
and dizzy as a thief after a chase.
I have grown my hair long, since then,
yet still it contains only certain birds, rising suns, water cups--
never the Saint Creolan medal you wore every day
when we were together.
In my open shoulder bag,
there are patchouli leaves and musk.
I will read them to seventeen people from a small stage,
and describe in dunes what I felt that night--
our third, and the second dream I had
while resting in your arms; a baked curve of horizon
with heat lines rising
like waterbirds taking flight
from each glorious thorn of our entwined mirage.
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for Karin's "April Second" prompt at Toads.
Oh hell... this is where I give up and go about my business as church warden's housekeeper.. Too much beauty for one day.
ReplyDeleteJealous, much? they ask. Nah! I take pride in ironing the altar cloths.
You take me breath away with your amazing imagery. I especially love "i was a caravan crossing your skin with borrowed Moroccan prayers." Wow!
ReplyDeleteMy breath. And i'm with Kerry and the altar cloths. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I love it all. To have such an experience and memories carried onward, would be wonderful :-)
ReplyDeleteyour images : a blown mind experience
ReplyDeletemuch love...
"from the step of a tomcat"
ReplyDeleteThat alone is poem enough to leave me frenzied with jealousy.
your imagery is evocative and intriguing
ReplyDelete"there are patchouli leaves and musk.
I will read them to seventeen people from a small stage,"
Yes, I loved each word! So much to love: "the tomcat in the dark, clocks were lit and lined my book shelf like roosting dawn, a cara van crossing your skin, dizzy as a thief, (I have grown my hair long - gives me a sense of time) The patchouli leaves and musk, waterbird taking flight"...a wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteThat shoulder bag most smell delicious.
ReplyDeleteFinal line like a cut gem
ReplyDeleteSigh...I am content to just hand the iron to the ironing women....and stand wait for them to complete the task.
ReplyDeleteGoodness, I wish someone had written this for me. Sigh...
ReplyDeleteWonderful torrid imagery, easy to sense as you cal it up. Thanks much. K.
ReplyDeleteNow I feel all tingly and – like Sherry – breathless.
ReplyDeleteA love poem as only yours can be, Shay--bright as a diamond set not in some glossy high dollar setting, but shining instead out from the dark ground of a dream where it has lain forever, waiting to be beautiful...all this and Saint Creola, too--I am swooning. :_)
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