Reanimated Lavender Granola Switchblade Nun rides again.

Tuesday, March 15, 2022

A Brief Instruction On Style


 Many hands make light work
and many hats make the Hydra happy,
thus, the night shift at the haberdashers.
Dig the butterscotch factory windows,
the glittery silver mercury pulse of industry!

Have you ever felt the urge to relocate to France,
reinvent yourself as a nun in a nation where faith is an artifact?
You and Saint Joan and a renegade postman
delivering visions, swordplay, and cafe au lait around the clock?

I have spoken to the Hydra with its ruby eye and hissing susurrations
hidden in a yellow profusion of forsythia.
It keeps a Wurlitzer and baseball cards and the Cretan Bull in there with it
and the beauty of their hats makes statues weep and flagstones dance.

Whether fez or porkpie, bowler or kepi,
one cannot think without a lure for angels atop one's golden dome.
Whether wide-brimmed or ostrich-feathered,
loveliness must begin nearest the seat of the Divine

And the Hydra with a set of nine, waves like sea grass
by the coastal shores of Nice
with the haberdashery humming behind it, all lit at night
like a cause,
a very banner 
or a blue streamer above the brim of the shining world.

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and

Dverse Poetics: Leave Your Hat On.
 
 

 
 
 

19 comments:

  1. Sounds like a great place to hang Shay! Cool piece… ✌๐Ÿผ๐ŸŽฉ

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  2. Oh I settled in nicely during the first stanza, but your second stanza........just so stunning, in that breathtaking dort of way...leading into wonderful verse. Really, this is rich, rich poetry.

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  3. If I were wearing a hat at this moment I would doff it in your honor. For me, Stanza 3 is the killer-diller! Marveloso! Thanks.

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  4. This is absolutely stunning, stunning work done! I especially like; "Whether fez or porkpie, bowler or kepi,one cannot think without a lure for angels atop one's golden dome."๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

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  5. How do you do it? How do you do it? How do you DO it? I am gob-smacked.

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  6. Shay - I feel like reading this poem is more of a psychological experience than an intellectual one. I simply got lost in your words.

    -David [ben Alexander]
    http://skepticskaddish.com/

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  7. puts my dirty beani work to shame .great poem

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  8. Wonderful image of the hydra wearing a porkpie on her head, among other hats! Your poetry is always so inventive ❤

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  9. Very cool. The hydra smiles, tips her hats.

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  10. I so enjoy your wonderful wordsmithing Shay!

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  11. Intriguing and engaging. Wow! So many hat references to feast on, and I enjoyed your descriptions like "butterscotch factory windows" and "the Hydra with a set of nine, waves like sea grass".

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  12. Transformed while reading your words, Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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  13. Surreal and gleaming with living images that shift and peer at the reader like the Hydra's profusion of chapeau'd heads--just gorgeous writing Shay. there is something beyond just whimsical here, something that keeps track of all the glittery, magical things which meet in our hearts. I especially love the third and forth stanzas, with their baseball cards, minotaur and angel lures.

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  14. I believe I have fallen under the spell of the many-hatted hydra!

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  15. Hydra and all her heads/hats .. I am a mythology fan and this poem ticked each one of 'my boxes.'

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  16. "and many hats make the Hydra happy" goddam. Where do you get amazing stuff like that. Then you bang it closed with "or a blue streamer above the brim of the shining world" Wow.

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  17. This is a wonderful journey of myth and man my friend! Your imagery of what is or should be is so cleverly crafted that it feels as real as it gets! I am with Qbit on that line of hats and Hydra! Simply brilliant Shay!

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  18. This is also wonderful. I want to go to this haberdashery, where is it, where is it?! I love the surrealism of the third stanza especially.

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  19. "Have you ever felt the urge to relocate to France,
    reinvent yourself as a nun in a nation where faith is an artifact?"

    yes, this is excellent, i really enjoyed reading this


    this is excellent!

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