I ate one and lived in darkness for a year.
I said to the sun, "I can never trust you again."
A peach appeared in my hand.
I hired a cook who worked in dough and ash.
I fed bread to my dogs and lived on the last.
Magpies fell from the sun--
they mated in my mirror and made eggs out of glass.
My cook killed the birds, my dogs killed the cook
and married me off to an eight-winged ghost.
My house has a thousand turrets and attics.
The sun rises pink and sets red, automatic.
I put a coin inside a peach like a pit.
There's a ghost inside my skull in a nest.
My dogs fuss and tear and bury the rest
in my heart with my hopes and such similar shit.
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for Word Garden Word List--Kindred
Music: Jackson C. Frank My Name Is Carnival
Your poem leaves me speechless really, but it has an ominous tone to it that I can really identify with right now. I never heard of Jackson Frank, but that music went well with your poem (and with my mood).
ReplyDeleteKa-pow! Knocked it outta the park, as you always do. Too many wondrous lines to quote. But I especially note "my dogs...married me off to an eight-winged ghost." Fantastic writing!
ReplyDeleteYou capture the air of sinister/surreal circus of dreams (and reality) so well - so many brilliant images and so neatly constructed - Jae
ReplyDeleteI feel thoroughly warned about anything falling from the sun now. An eight-winged ghost! My poet mind got caught up for a bit imagining such a creature and now wants a whole poem dedicated to this being. You poem is So. Dang. Good.
ReplyDeleteRiddling riddles that leave one unbalanced, turning over the past like tarot cards with cryptic images: these are the games we play when our hearts are rent in two. But those dogs, they will keep doing doggie things.
ReplyDeleteAn amazing use of metaphor---the coins, the sun, the dogs, all serving up the insanity of a world where norms no longer exist and things spiral out of control at a rate which outpaces the heart's ability to absorb or the mind's ability to decipher. Fine fine writing that shoots from the hip, and hits every clown in the circus.
ReplyDeleteYou have so brilliantly shown me how sanity is not part of the world we now live in, and anything that feels normal makes us run with irony to google to see if AI can find or prove reality exists. You always amaze me with your storytelling creativity.
ReplyDeleteSo good! Really pulled it all together in the end.
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