( Daryl has inspired me this morning with her photo post "The Doors." Thanks, lady.)
Certain sorts of empty rooms are like a Sunday morning--
All that clear space like a deep breath taken
Then released like roses to a vase
When your lover's hand
Finds your hip
Under clean sheets
Under slanting light
When time cradles you like a pillow
And the only punishment for lingering
Shall be kisses
And soft words.
Certain sorts of empty rooms are endearing for what they don't contain--
All that easy air unstifled by
Successful husbands in golf shirts
Or wives hoarding secret thoughts as close as shivs;
Well established respectable families so entrenched, they couldn't be dynamited out
And who would deny the concussion
If it came.
Empty rooms
Are like a first kiss
Empty rooms
Are like a close death
Empty rooms
Are at the command of every fingertip--
Sleep late
Skip church;
If you've loved faith,
You carry hope
Into each empty room like a banner
Or a long-awaited, soft sweet-smelling child.
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This is so magical I've read it a half a dozen times.
ReplyDeleteShay, this is so lovely!
ReplyDelete"...and the only punishment for lingering shall be kisses and soft words." Wow!
ReplyDeletewow, magical, breathtaking, in its simplicity and honesty. i love it!
ReplyDeleteAwwwwwwww! Very sweet.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy reading your work.
I had those long-awaited children. This was beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove it .. I am really feeling cool that my photo inspired your words .. since your words always make me 'see' things as well as feel them. xo
ReplyDeleteJesus-Sweet-Holified-Mary. How the do you keep topping yourself? It must be a hard act to follow yourself.
ReplyDeleteCould you please send me your autograph before you completely forget I ever existed and there is only the aura of shiny people surronding you in your mansion on the hill?
:)
I love this one.
ReplyDelete"Empty rooms
ReplyDeleteAre like a first kiss
Empty rooms
Are like a close death"
Excellent thought, they are indeed, like both these things.
Hi, I like this poem, you have such a certain voice, every word is just right and conjures wonderful feelings as well as imagery. I seem to read your poems with a slightly dropped jaw, wondering how they can look so easy on the eye yet contain so much.
ReplyDeleteThe music put me off slightly, but only when trying to make sure I got the precise meaning from reading your poem and I'm easily distracted!
Empty rooms *sigh* yes they are beautiful, especially the ones inside ones head.Good write, you.
ReplyDelete*blush* wow, thanks everyone.
ReplyDeletePink, you can turn the music off by scrolling down to the player and hitting the pause button. :-)
Empty rooms.... very lovely and thought provoking.
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