When I was five,
The devil came for me
But I was wise--
I knew
He wasn't who he claimed to be
I knew
He wasn't related to me
So, like any frustrated male,
He swore out a special hatred
And stayed on my trail
Like a bloodhound
And cursed the ground
I walked on.
When I was eighteen,
The devil came for me
But I said, "la la la la I can't hear you
You can come around and come again
But as long as they keep making gin
I won't fear you"
But I should have.
Oh Mama, Mama,
Why can't you hear your girl cry?
Down at the end of the hall
My Mama fine and tall
Why don't you throw your bible at the devil, instead of leaving me alone in the night?
When I am lonely,
That's when the devil comes for me
It's like clockwork, automatic
He comes down from the attic
And then I feel five again
But I'm stubborn,
So stubborn,
I spit in his big red eye
So, like any insulted male,
He holds back a special evil,
Drops it in the mail,
And promises me
Delivery when I least expect it.
Oh Mama, Mama,
Why can't you hear your girl cry?
Down at the end of the hall
My Mama fine and tall
Why don't you throw your bible at the devil, instead of leaving me alone in the night?
That is sad! Beautiful as always, though.
ReplyDeleteOh very very sad and heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteAgain with such few words, you express them well.
This is heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteWhy don't you throw your bible at the devil, instead of leaving me alone in the night?
ReplyDeleteI'm sure she wasn't cleaning the vestibules at the church.
Are you sure you're from this planet? :)
ReplyDeleteWriting don't usually get this good.
In humans.
ooh - I really like Pouty lips comment. I hadn't thought of that.
ReplyDeleteThis one is a little scary.
Thanks, Twin!
ReplyDeleteThank you, T. I do try to be as concise as possible. I never saw the sense in taking a thousand words to say what fifty will do better. I am a poet for the short attention span era, and proud of it!
Mama Zen and Pouty, thanks as always. :-)
K, it WAS scary. That's why I'm writing about it, lo these many years later. :-(
Ha, Jannie, thanks. I love that comment, whether I deserve it or no. :-)
So sad... I think that it is beautiful though. keep writing.
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i'm going to have to find new and innovative ways of saying how awesome your verses are. right now, i only know about three ways. i will get the gnomes i have enslaved to stop working on the device i'm making them build, and start working on a long list for me to use.
ReplyDeletei am always partial to poetry that includes mention of the devil.