Flash Fiction Friday



The succubus sits on a hill overlooking town, brooding. There were hikers. Now there aren't. Never disturb a hormonal succubus. She looks down and sees a smoke plume above Mulberry Place Mall. They must not have had the shoes Chloe wanted. Now that that God chick transferred to Danny's Too in Norman, it's love again.

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Comments

Anonymous said…
I'm feeling a little vengeful myself today.
I feel bad for Chloe and her shoes. Excellent 55!
Riot Kitty said…
I've got to try this...
Shadow said…
pms?? succubus'???? nice 55!
G-Man said…
I just don't get women and their shoes. But I do indeed appreciate a good 55 when I read one. Thanks for FINALLY getting around to tell me you posted one....:P
"Never disturb a hormonal succubus." Ha-ha.
anthonynorth said…
Deceptively deep words.
Mama Zen said…
Shrieking, shrieking, shrieking with delight!

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