Here, put on this stone coat.
Walk with me.
Even if you were warm before, it will leave you shivering
And it is heavy
With plenty of pockets stuffed with regret, deception and train tickets.
Here, wrap it tight.
The seams are made of a sleety wind--
Let it whip your bones
And that paltry cup of brown leaves you call a heart.
Let's hold hands, like links in a good stout chain.
There is a starving bear on the other end,
Sick of tricks
And drooling over us twin dolls, presented like meat cookies
On a flat blind tray.
Or should we try to stay alive in naked embrace?
Clear the snow away and kiss me.
Rub ice on my blacking toes,
Shout to me through the pack ice,
I will toss flowers to you from my airless tomb beneath the floe.
I confess that I long for the warm hour in summer,
When I had coffee and my
Little ridiculous pennant
To mark the top of the world.
But it's no good, nothing will burn out here,
Not even your old love letters,
Which I should have eaten when I could--
Though they make fine cudgels now.
So come freeze with me.
Finger your old lovers' skulls like a rosary
And stuff candy promises into the open fractures;
Oh Love, it's wonderful,
We're together and I feel less and less,
They say in the end the letting go is easy--
We'll be like babies
Falling asleep under our mobile of silly debris
Airborne in the sharp stark indifference of our solitary deaths in the storm.
Damn Shay. This one's intense.
ReplyDeletestrong words, never-ending, seemingly... well done!
ReplyDeleteIntense yet there's an underlying feeling of gentleness
ReplyDeleteIntense and powerful.
ReplyDeleteIntense is right. Thanks for the eye candy ;)
ReplyDeleteAs all very truly put it, I too attest to the fact that this one is mighty intense!!! Great writing!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone, for your kind comments. I can only stand to post a few whimsical things before I need to set fire to something.
ReplyDeleteLOL @ Kitty. You're welcome. You can thank my friend Liandra for that.
Daryl, you always see a little deeper, don't you? Despite all the bears and blizzards, the heart of this poem lies in vulnerability.
This is the part I loved the most: "There is a starving bear on the other end, Sick of tricks
ReplyDeleteAnd drooling over us twin dolls, presented like meat cookies
On a flat blind tray."
*Hugs*
Beautiful Shay, very intense but vulnerable too.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful. It is so far removed from any talent that I have that it leaves me in awe. Congrats on POTD mention from Authorblog!
ReplyDeleteHey Shay, I totally agree with the above comment, this poem leaves me in awe too. I feel a great fondness shining out from it for the lover who is being addressed and yet the feeling that the love has turned into a dead love, or perhaps just a weak reflection of what it used to be? Perhaps an old, familiar love being re-examined?
ReplyDeleteI have a habit of unique interpretation though...
I was reading Post of the Day and saw that you were nominated. Congrats! So I had to come back by and re-read this again. This is definitely a winner. What popped out at me just now was: "Finger your old lovers' skulls like a rosary and stuff candy promises into the open fractures."
ReplyDeleteoh ur so melodramatic, but i love it, and so damn creative with it. lubs ranty fire caught ur panties you xxx
ReplyDeleteVisiting from Poetry Jam: Yes, fits the prompt, and as many have said....this poem is truly intense!
ReplyDeleteplenty of pockets stuffed with regret, deception and train tickets, my fav.line, powerful stuff
ReplyDelete... pure paradise!
ReplyDeleteThe bold and surprising images made me need to catch my breath, tripping forward over them...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your unique voice, Shay!
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I felt the shivers after reading this one. It makes one feel vulnerable and cold. I love the image of the pockets filled with regret, deception, and train tickets as well as the bear. Oh how I wish I had the imagination you do! Love the Edgar Cayce quote too
ReplyDeleteParadise couldn't get any more lost than that!
ReplyDeleteyou rock the tortured love, Shay ~ i hereby hand you my crown and annoint you the Queen of Tortured Love!
{i love your Edgar Cayce quote!}
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Powerful words and images. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMelanie