He's dead, Jim.
Slick-talker Johnny Walker gentleman gin,
He's dead.
My friend from the beginning,
Just like we'd known each other forever
He made everything better
Made my mother finally just
Shut up
Shut up
Shut up
But now,
He's dead, Jim,
A penny for the old guy.
He's dead, Jim,
But he listened when I said,
I cannot be ugly
And I cannot be queer
Look at me on the tightwire between denial and self-destruction,
Anybody'd need a drink
If this was what they did all day,
But now
He's dead, Jim,
And the circus has left town.
He's dead, Jim,
But there was a time when I loved him
And would have done anything just to be with him
Johnny Angel,
How I love him
And I'm hopin' someday he'll love me...
What of it,
If he took me places no lady should be,
White faced and bloody kneed?
What of it,
If he kept trying to throw me out of the car at the asylum, the penitentiary, the morgue?
What of it,
If he left me alone and not knowing my own name
Passed out on the rolling lawns at dawn?
It's a fine and private place.
He's dead, Jim,
But I can still feel his embrace.
He's dead, Jim,
Now I have new friends,
Coffee, books, and my own thoughts.
I have raised a child without him
And I hope,
Done some good in the world.
Even though the grave stays fresh,
He's dead, Jim,
Lo these twenty-three years.
He's dead, Jim,
But now I know
There will never be enough love
Enough chocolate
Enough sex
Enough anything
To make the longing that started it go away.
I don't believe
In cures
In congregations
Or in Yoko and me
That's not reality
But I have come to believe that a power greater than myself can restore me to sanity
And I am grateful for every grace that's given,
Because
He's not dead, Jim,
Only
Waiting...
_________
"I have raised a child without him"
ReplyDeleteI love that part.
have you touched a string... excellent writing girlie girl!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kristin. I am really glad that my son has never once had to see me drunk. That's important, a gift I have been able to give him.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Shadow! Makin' me smile here. Hey, who else do you know who could rip off, er, I mean reference, Star Trek, Shelly Fabares, T.S Eliot, Andrew Marvell, John Lennon and Leon Russell, all in one poem? ;-)
I really enjoyed this one.
ReplyDeleteI'm still rolling it around my mind.
It bought to mind a particularlly controlling ex-boyfriend. The kind of guy I'm thankful dumped me before I became someone I hate.
(I'm married to a Jim, but thankfull he's wonderful.)
Only you could get all those references rolled into one perfect poem ... and make me feel it
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ReplyDeleteHoly shit can you ever write!!!
What a masterpiece.
Say...On Fridays the gang and I have a little fun with only 55 words. You need a central character, a plot, and EXACTLY 55 words to tell your story.
Although there are no real rules, and some folks just do poetry.
Think about it...Please?
You are truely a treasure, thanks for sharing a little of your brilliance with us....G
Wow. Again.
ReplyDeleteShay, I have come to the conclusion, you can write about absolutely anything, and it is always brilliant!! Just BRILLIANT! You wow me every time!
ReplyDeleteVery well-written this one!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat work, Shay.
ReplyDeleteMy jury is still out on the "enough chocolate" thing . . .
ReplyDeleteOh geez, Mama Zen is the French judge! ;-)
ReplyDeleteFantastic. It's funny how a little thing like distilled potatos can overtake our world. You should be so proud to have won that one!
ReplyDeleteLove the Star Trek references!!!
Outstanding! No wonder David picked this for his post of the day.
ReplyDeleteI spent 14 years married to an alcoholic -- and 10 years getting over it. Most days now I am sane. I seldom drink. Even my occasional glass of wine with dinner rarely gets finished.
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Congratulations on winning David's Authorblog Post of the Day award for this poignant memoir-poem.
ReplyDeleteGood luck to you and your son,
M.
Congrats on winning David's POTD. Your poem stirred me.
ReplyDelete#1 POTD! Congrats - you deserve it.
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing. Brilliant insights. Well done.
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