A roadside stand
Was selling clouds like ears of corn--
You could shake out real angels
Or deliver yourself into one like post.
"Tell me your deepest desire," a voice said.
I surprised myself by answering, "I want to be a barn cat.
I would have startling eyes, good sharp claws and wild desires,
And yet,
I would be as beautiful as lazy and belong to no one."
When the stand shut down,
Clouds turning purple in the west,
I switched my tail and asked the angels,
"Is there no one who could love me?
Why must I always be alone?"
Departing, they replied,
"Little barn cat,
You are loved by open spaces and the night;
That is sufficient unto thee."
My deepest desire gained,
I waited for morning and the chance it would bring
To exercise my passionate unreasoning instinct
To kill anything with wings.
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that was amazing...
ReplyDeletei really loved it..
Well, I'll be damned! I'm actually a barn cat!
ReplyDeleteBlossom,
ReplyDeleteThis is unbelievable. I keep reading it over and over in order to picture it again and again.
How do you come up with these?! Wow.
ReplyDeleteFreedom.
ReplyDeleteSounds wonderful.
But I don't think I mind the winged things. I'd leave them alone and go after the mice.
meow! how cool. i love your thinking, have i told you that?
ReplyDeleteBarn cat. Who would of thought?
ReplyDeleteI love the last line. Such a counter to the rest ... love it
ReplyDelete"Little barn cat,
ReplyDeleteYou are loved by open spaces and the night;"
I LOVE THIS!!:)
This is GOOD! Are you submitting your writing in for publishing?
ReplyDeleteOne day you'll be autographing your books.
ReplyDeleteTruly.
I believe Barn Cat is loved by more than open spaces and the night. I love Barn Cat. Don't I count??
ReplyDeleteI want to be a barn cat now...
ReplyDeleteThat first paragraph made me and voracious for a big bowl of fresh cloud.
ReplyDeleteAnd the rest made me voracious for a barn cat.
Wow, so powerful this poem. Thank you for reminding me of the nature of our dear and loved cats...and ourselves.
ReplyDeleteGabi
This one made me smile :D I loved the whole poem, but the end was my favorite part. You are so talented!
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone, for all the amazing comments! And, Scarlet, of course you count. You count double. ;-)
ReplyDeleteVery good choice - barn cat. Them get more snaks on the hoof then us will.
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