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Monday, April 13, 2009

Roadside Stand



A roadside stand

Was selling clouds like ears of corn--

You could shake out real angels

Or deliver yourself into one like post.


"Tell me your deepest desire," a voice said.

I surprised myself by answering, "I want to be a barn cat.

I would have startling eyes, good sharp claws and wild desires,

And yet,

I would be as beautiful as lazy and belong to no one."


When the stand shut down,

Clouds turning purple in the west,

I switched my tail and asked the angels,

"Is there no one who could love me?

Why must I always be alone?"

Departing, they replied,

"Little barn cat,

You are loved by open spaces and the night;

That is sufficient unto thee."


My deepest desire gained,

I waited for morning and the chance it would bring

To exercise my passionate unreasoning instinct

To kill anything with wings.

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18 comments:

  1. that was amazing...

    i really loved it..

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  2. Well, I'll be damned! I'm actually a barn cat!

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  3. Blossom,
    This is unbelievable. I keep reading it over and over in order to picture it again and again.

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  4. How do you come up with these?! Wow.

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  5. Freedom.

    Sounds wonderful.

    But I don't think I mind the winged things. I'd leave them alone and go after the mice.

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  6. meow! how cool. i love your thinking, have i told you that?

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  7. Barn cat. Who would of thought?

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  8. I love the last line. Such a counter to the rest ... love it

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  9. "Little barn cat,

    You are loved by open spaces and the night;"

    I LOVE THIS!!:)

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  10. This is GOOD! Are you submitting your writing in for publishing?

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  11. One day you'll be autographing your books.

    Truly.

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  12. I believe Barn Cat is loved by more than open spaces and the night. I love Barn Cat. Don't I count??

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  13. That first paragraph made me and voracious for a big bowl of fresh cloud.

    And the rest made me voracious for a barn cat.

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  14. Wow, so powerful this poem. Thank you for reminding me of the nature of our dear and loved cats...and ourselves.

    Gabi

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  15. This one made me smile :D I loved the whole poem, but the end was my favorite part. You are so talented!

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  16. Thank you, everyone, for all the amazing comments! And, Scarlet, of course you count. You count double. ;-)

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  17. Very good choice - barn cat. Them get more snaks on the hoof then us will.

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