There is a certain beauty in a woman
That only another woman sees;
And when I see it, it is like
Falling
And it is like
The sound stemware makes when a toast is made
And it is like
Nothing else I know of.
She is perfectly flawed.
She makes me want to throw open a window and lean out, gathering my wits.
She makes me want to close that window and turn around.
She has no idea...
People will say, well, you had your day--
But I didn't.
I was buried underground
Like one of those catfish
All summer long.
There is a certain beauty in a woman
That only another woman sees;
And when I see it, it is like
Falling
And it is like
A shift in my heart
And it is like
Nothing else I know of,
Except perhaps rain
When the season has been long, and dry, and the summer is long since gone.
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I don't know what to say to this.
ReplyDeleteBut I hope the pain will go away.
Woah. I feel you. It made my heart cry out. Breathtaking expression, love.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully sad, Shay.
ReplyDeleteI can't imagine.
Yes, I can imagine the feeling. What I can't imagine, is someone finding more beauty in a woman than I do ;-)
I mean,
I like 'em all
be they short or tall.
Be they plump or lean,
nice or mean (mostly nice?)
But, it's not liking them you write of, is it?
No, you write of a much deeper thing.
I still don't know how you manage to be so prolific and brilliant at the same time!
ReplyDeleteThere is a sure Beauty in a woman that only another woman can see and feel and write about...
ReplyDeleteOh I realize now-again- how I love to be a woman ;-)
Wow, this poem makes me ♥ being a woman! :) Sweet one, Shay.
ReplyDeleteOh sweetie...
ReplyDeleteGorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThanks, all of you, for your sweet comments about my poem!
ReplyDeleteRK, maybe it's because I overthink everything! This one stemmed from a visit to the salon. No one is safe!
the world through your eyes is a beautiful place!
ReplyDeleteBeing only a man, one of those stupid idiots (I should know them all, because I AM one) I am blest to come here and read, enjoy, even partake in the words, thoughts, and feelings of woman...even as little as I may comprehend.
ReplyDeleteYour description extricates those deep intricacies conceived by my own vague notion of the heart, the soul, the web of feelings of WOMAN.
As close as I could in understanding 'woman' happened as a girl sitting next to me in a church choir unexpectedly spied her husband entering a faraway door. She whispered to me:
"Whenever I see him walk into a room, he makes my toes tingle!"
If EVERY woman or man would have that effect on another human during a lifetime of being...life might be OH! so more worthwhile.
FireBlossom, I pray that certain one may make your toes tingle once again--and soon. I mean that!
I hope you are "falling" once again, and that your heart shifts.
Also I see that gentle rain falling down from heaven upon the place beneath--where Shay reclines in a green meadow. The gentle rain which is to nurture her body and soul...after the long, and dry, season post-summer.
(I almost want to write "Amen" after this.)
crushingly beautifully beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteAh yes, you write so well. xo
ReplyDeleteBig sigh!
ReplyDeleteI'm heading out of town for the week and won't have an internet connection. I'll catch up with you when I get back.
Have a great week.
xo
We came from a woman, and we remember on some level. Beautiful poem, lyrical.
ReplyDeleteAnd some of them are cows and them moo, but me are speaking of one in particular.
ReplyDeleteWell....
ReplyDeleteThe essence of Fireblossom transcends any verbal description.
This much I know...You can write your ass off girl!
Beauty that makes you feel like falling... wow, what a sensation...
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful, beautiful poem, Shay...
only a woman can get under your skin and create an itch that just needs to be scratched... yeah only a woman... can look right into me and say, i know who you are, and then flick her blonde locks and say follow me! only a woman... for sure - beautiful shay x
ReplyDeleteOh, I love this. Thank you for creating it.
ReplyDeleteNo one writes about being a woman as wonderfully as you.
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