Yes Darling,
I have no doubt...
A bite of apple is enough to sustain you.
Set it there,
On the five dollar mag you feign reading.
You're such a pretentious bitch,
And no one looks more fetching in vintage white than you.
Let the church call,
I'll tell them the apple can't be had at any price;
Since the perfection of your lips,
The touch of your teeth,
It has been rattling off the most enchanting gibberish
Like a saint in extremity
Backwards and in French.
La-de-da, Your Highness.
Let me light you another reeking cigarette
Until you are nothing but a gorgeous, noxious cloud
With a different Moses for every day of the week, worshipping at your tapping feet.
It's only the speed.
Who, darling, enables you the way I do?
Who listens to your fantastic bullshit until dawn?
Who kicks the men out when you tire of them?
Who stalls the devil, downstairs in the vestibule?
I am your apple,
My poisonous beauty;
Until you bite my flushed skin
Absently sucking until I tremble and flutter,
Not strong enough to deny you
Even as you throw away the core.
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for Magpie 30
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This is funny in odd ways, with an undertone of hatred. I dig it!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Anne Rice. The writing, I mean.
ReplyDeleteIt actually reminded me of the movie with Katherine zeta jones and Julia Roberts...I can't remember the name...but it reminds me of their relationship in that movie. Great writing as usual :)
ReplyDeleteThis was hot. I think I need a cigarette =) Seriously, your writing is original and unbelievably stupendous....loved it
ReplyDeleteIt actually reminded me of the movie with Katherine zeta jones and Julia Roberts...I can't remember the name...but it reminds me of their relationship in that movie. Great writing as usual :)
ReplyDeleteThis was hot. I think I need a cigarette =) Seriously, your writing is original and unbelievably stupendous....loved it
ReplyDeleteYou are so naughty ! Me likey ! The way you refered to the girl in the poem as a "pretentious bitch" kinda sounded like a compliment.
ReplyDeleteShe's a poisonous beauty AND a pretentious bitch...a winning combination!
ReplyDeleteChica, you make forbidden fruit sound so juicy! ;)
Such a funny write. ! loved it:))
ReplyDeletepretentious bitch ! ha ha.
"Backwards and in French" -
ReplyDeleteoh là là or should that be là là oh? Attitude with a CAPITAL A~!
This is just how I imagine a forbidden fruit to act.
Loved it, Shay!
(and this is my second attempt to post a comment. Google is hating on me right now so I hope this works!)
do not know if I should take up smoking or give up apples after reading this....maybe just stop believing in fairytales...Great Write...bkm
ReplyDeleteshe's a fake
ReplyDeletesays one thing and lives another
be who you are and love it!!!
That rankles me
have I said this before? We get along cuz we are Gemini ( I probably forget cuz I'm gem)crazy, zany, break the rules...
gotta love em
moonie smiles
Funny, I think I know that
ReplyDeletepretentious bitch.
Forbidden fruit, exactly.
ReplyDeleteHoly shmoly, what a ripe romp this was. I couldn't write anything this clever ever ever.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly ate this prompt down to the core... :)
ReplyDeleteMy gosh that was an amazing read!I could feel the tension... wow I have to go read it again there is so much depth to it, so many layers.
ReplyDeleteShay you sure have a way of nicely doing naughty....you have your very own amazing style. Wonderful Magpie! :-)
ReplyDeleteNow, I want to have an apple for lunch ;-)
ReplyDeleteThe straight girl just doesn't know !
I've read this several times ... will come back for more! So full of emotion you can reach out and touch.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous and intense.
ReplyDeleteThe seeds of an apple contain cyanide.
ReplyDeleteamazing
ReplyDeletenice shay...love the rampant pace of this...the intensity...perhaps feeling a bit used by the old bird eh?
ReplyDeleteWho, darling, enables you the way I do?
ReplyDeleteLoved the pace and tumbling words of wit, love and hate !
oh - la - la - don't know what to say
ReplyDelete…it's only the speed…
great magpie shay
ouch-bitingly written.
ReplyDeleteoohhh...excellent.
ReplyDeletesuperb tale!
ReplyDeletenot strong enough to deny you...
ReplyDeletebrilliant.
apples can do that?
ReplyDeletehmph.
must be why the doctors recommend it.
Ooo...this one has quite a delicious bite to it. I love-love "like a saint in extremity backwards and in French" and "different Moses for every day of the week".
ReplyDeleteBeautifully biting commentary!
ReplyDeleteHot stuff indeed! You got that love-hate relationship down so well.
ReplyDeleteSo many layers of tension... all from the simple bite of an apple.
ReplyDeleteWell written.
Well done. Did you see the play Evita? This sounds like the Che Guevara character talking to Eva Peron, scorn dripping from his lips.
ReplyDeleteI loved these lines:
It has been rattling off the most enchanting gibberish/Like a saint in extremity/Backwards and in French.
Whew!I'd say she's someone who knows her stilettos (and not just shoes). So well done...thank you.
ReplyDeleteOooohhh.. loved the hatred in your piece.. what emotions and what passion.. wonderful and a very powerful mag !!!
ReplyDeleteLotta anger in there hon'. Is this pretentious bitch the same one staring out Jocelyn's window?
ReplyDeleteAhaa.. bitter and dark! Or was it green??
ReplyDeleteWhatever it was, I enjoyed the read!
Spoken like a TRUE (rejected) apple!!
Summa of hypocritical peeps need to read this!!
Good one, Shay!
Wow! I had to come back and read this again. Sensual and bitingly funny. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou have created a relationship between heart and object in a most delectable way. Really enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteCJ xx
Came back to read another and found this multi layered, hot little number. This rocks!
ReplyDeleteOuch on that last line. It's painful to be cored.
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"Like a saint in extremity
ReplyDeleteBackwards and in French.
La-de-da, Your Highness.
Let me light you another reeking cigarette
Until you are nothing but a gorgeous, noxious cloud"
Honey you got talent to spare, so send me some, don't be such a selfish! I could use some of this talent! You're exquisite, lady!
just brilliant
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