When the plane went down, at night, in the desert,
The cargo hold burst
And a few things were thrown clear.
It's cold in the dark, in the desert,
And after the hulk burned itself out,
Three heart beats remained in the shadows.
The one with the injured head would fade out with the moon, before morning.
The broken arm would envy suitcases, rocks, anything that does not know pain,
And a third sat silently, and ridiculously, unhurt.
They had
Some Mexican dolls in crates;
Some California video games,
And a sled bound, like them, for Boston.
They burned the sled,
Trading the sky back for its snow, sending smoke this time instead;
Then the dolls,
Which seemed far too close to the bone, but they used what was at hand
Because they hadn't any choice.
In the morning,
It grew hot. One was dead.
The sun rose yellow in the sky like an advertisement for a morning newspaper--
Sports final, funnies.
They sat where they had found themselves, like broken weather vanes.
They sat amid the video games,
All that was left,
And tried to decide whether to wait or start walking.
For them, the decision meant everything.
Above,
The sky was a silly blue,
As blank and unconcerned as the face of a child holding a magnifying glass,
And whose kindness stops
At the end of his own nose.
_________
for magpie 44

35 comments:
your creativity and imagination never disappoint :)
Brilliant... Leaves me wanting to know more. Whatever became of them beneath that silly sky?
When does one learn compassion?
This has a "Lost" vibe ... from beginning to endless possibilities for resolution - or not.
stellar writing
Excellent!
What an incredible result from that sled - You're not alone in seeing the plane image, though... Interesting how your story evoled from it - you are a master at the art, that's for sure. :)
Oh what a tale, beautifully told so I almost felt I was there. It's all sad and tragic, but the final stanza makes it positively ominous, as if, without saying the word, we know the outcome.
Almost missed this one hiding under the other, which seems kind of appropriate, actually, since there's a lot of meaning and thought also hiding as always in your words that both cover and reveal the souls of things. Sitting amidst the video games--expensive,thousands of hours and dollars to develop, symbols of immature and frivolous consumption--ultimately absolutely useless...fine fine poem, Shay.
Such a grim tale, so well told. I loved especially "as blank and unconcerned" and "whose kindness stops at the end of his own nose."
Really great juxtaposition of the prosaic objects and the existential struggle. Wow.
P.s. I love your About Me section!
I loved this Shay, you really have a special something that shines through everything you write!
I loved your take on the prompt, Shay.
Another blogger saw the aeroplane in the sledge picture . . but what a story you have made of it. I'd love to know where the ideas in the poem came from. Very adventurous imagination here.
What a wonderful write!
So much to ponder....so much truth....i always feel as if i am taking steps onto another world or planet....all is new and captivating in your your world of words Shay!! :-)
Damn. This is brilliant.
kindness stops at the end of his nose. What a wonderful phrase for the worst kind of humanity. Great job
Brilliant piece, out of the sky it fell...
Wonderful tale. Shades of "Castaway" here. Haunting.
Awesome post! I did not waver from it even for a sec!
who hid that story for us to find
oh loved it!
Compassion could be learned for some, known by others. A spectacular piece!
What an amazing piece--so creative and it does make one think--compassion, survival, luck--all things that fashion our world.
Teresa
yes..where is the love?
and the salt
because if they are they going to start eating each other they need a good preservative.
what?
it makes for good TV.
This is so well written - sobering and very thought provoking.
This is such a powerful piece. The images were so real. A sled burning in the desert... really good.
Wonderful! Glad there are others who are a bit morbid. Well done.
A cool, stark narrative related in an impassive, detached voice that renders the poem so much more powerful and resonant than would be the case with a more passionate engagement. Some great images, particularly in the killer final stanza.
how do you do this? you are quite something!
excellent. as always.
You amaze me, Shay. Those final lines are bravely writ in the Time of the Cult of the Child.
what a story--your final image is haunting in its beauty and desperation--excellent magpie!
Ooh--wow!
Hello. I'm Phoebe Cate's cousin, Philippa, and I strongly suggest that "Dolls" be linked in your sidebar, Ms. FireBlossom.
This is just an awesome, awesome poem from the greatest Web poet I know.
xoxo
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