I'm Savanna.
I live right up these steps.
This is a sycamore.
That's a mulberry.
Sycamores are too big, messy, not really pretty.
I carved my name into the wood--
S-A-V-A-N-N-A,
With a good sharp knife.
I'm Savanna.
I like night, and summer, best.
I have a cat, and I can tell
You're not from anyplace around here.
Would you like to kiss me?
I didn't mean right now.
I have given up painting my nails,
Or trying to be sweet.
I spell my name Savanna--
No "h".
That's right.
I'm Savanna.
Does anybody know you're here?
I like long skirts, and boots, all seasons.
Listen,
When a girl tells you she loves you,
It can be tricky.
This tree is a locust.
I don't live up these stairs.
Summer is too long and hot,
And I don't intend to let you kiss me.
My name isn't Savanna,
But...
I told the truth about the knife.
_______
Sunday, July 11, 2010
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14 spoke through the ouija:
Hey...what inspired this one?
so you have met my alter-ego, have you???
Glad to mee you, (not)Savanna.
Savanna(no "h") is not the one you want to go up the stairs with but she's probably the one they choose most often.
I loved the last stanza and "This tree is a locust" was a great line, Shay.
I knew you was tellin' a tale
I thought Savanna would carve her name in her skin somehow.
Shay,
I kind of like Savanna or whatever her real name is. Will we get to read more about her? She's got a lot of spunk and her mischievousness just pops out:~)
I also enjoyed how you wove your way to the ending..."I told the truth about the knife."
This one made me smile. I don't know if that's a good thing or not, but I enjoyed it:~)
ooo...twisty...sounds like someone i dont want to mess with...smiles.
Savanna sounds very mysterious!
Savanna without the h...I love that!
PS - Maybe you should read the book I recommended in today's post! lol
Love it. I want to met Savanna, or who ever she really is :)
A girl who knows her knife *sweet*
I'm soooo glad you found us at One Stop Poetry - feedback is welcome. We want it to be a one stop for poets
Moon love
Every girl needs a good sharp knife.
Sweet knife it is too. A Gerber? Or maybe it's custom.
Bet I know where it came from. ;-)
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