Bertha, the place is burning, burning,
And it's just as well--
You were never happy here.
Come down off the roof, girl.
We will glide across the wet lawn like two foaming new ghosts--
Fresh as morning.
Sugar,
You will not miss
The grim-faced help bringing tainted chicken soup.
You will not miss
All the new wives with their tiresome luggage.
You will not even miss your husband--
He loved his dog better than you.
Madwoman nothin'.
Come, we'll hit the early sales.
Whatever it is,
I will kiss it better.
Whatever it is,
There's an endorphin for that.
Bertha, the place is burning, burning,
And yet the outside air is so sweet--
Dearie, you were never any madder
Or one bit crazier
Than me.
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for Willow's Magpie 25
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foaming new ghosts...yikes! the place is burning! a fun bit of madness there shay...
ReplyDeleteI like that bit of madness. :) Bertha needs to let that guy go.
ReplyDeleteNice take on the Magpie; congratulations.
ReplyDeleteBertha sounds hurt and conflicted, but someone like you can help her turn her life around.
ReplyDeletePS - Crazy is good! :)
magical!
ReplyDeleteBertha has a soul mate. Cool.
ReplyDeleteA man that loves his dog more than his wife - not a keeper!
ReplyDeleteI can't help thinking arson, arson, arson...
Madness abounds and overflows. The "foaming ghosts" is gonna stick with me, Shay.
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
Original and quite unique! I enjoyed reading your Magpie...
ReplyDelete"Foaming new ghosts
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fresh as morning"
I really love your words, the rhythm and voice of the poem,
"madwoman nothin'"
This is a wonderful fresh sassy read.
good work
ReplyDeleteAloha from Waikiki
Comfort Spiral
I like it!
ReplyDeleteThere's an endorphin for everything....
ReplyDelete..the place is burning, burning - wow - love the bit of "whimsical" feel in your poem - it's amazing!
ReplyDeletehave a great sunday shay
Loved the madness in it. :)
ReplyDeleteI love this! I just reread Jane a week or so ago.
ReplyDeleteGood one! And is fire blossom like fire weed? Is it the same?
ReplyDeleteIt's madness! Sweet and imaginative - I love it!
ReplyDeleteThere is something about this poem, a certain something that moves and inspires and stirs the soul. This is beautifully written, the dialogue is poignant and endearingly profound.
ReplyDeletethis is fabulous! Love its craziness and simultaneous sanity.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely never look back...freedom comes in original ways..Very nice!
ReplyDeleteBrillant reminds me of Jane Eyre - and the mad woman on the roof...insanity -it keeps itself under wrap until the fire starts...then we all need to be rescued - usually from our self...Great Magpie....bkm
ReplyDeleteFun-fun!! I loved this!
ReplyDeleteVery nice - and quite enjoyable.
ReplyDelete(humming) Alice it's my turn today.
ReplyDelete"There's an endorphin for that"... I love it!
Wild, wild! Fun read, truly...
ReplyDeleteOooo, so fantastic! I totally think this one and "The Girl Who Dreamt of Polar Bears," (dont know if I have the title right) are an awesome start to a dream, dillusional, wonderful collection that i would totally buy if you got published. love this type of crazy, beautiful story poems.
ReplyDeleteIt was an eye-opener of a read! Cold(inspite of the fire)!!
ReplyDeleteSome very intense emotions here...
Yes, Bertha, times awasting, get the hell out of dodge...have some fun and, by all means, shop while Rome burns!
ReplyDeletelove your way with words...this was fun and maddening :) Great magpie!
ReplyDeleteBurning bright.
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