The juju cowgirl
Came like Venus straight out of the water--
Her horse stepping high,
And her hat brim pulled low.
She swayed in the saddle like a prom queen's last dance,
Holding the reins loosely
As she passed the factories, row houses,
And on past a flock of taxis at their stand.
The juju cowgirl only knows one way to kiss--
Like it's high summer in the mountains.
Just before she left,
She painted a moon and stars mandala
On the soft skin of her best girl's back.
She kissed her hair and both shoulders,
Falling across her like yellow sunlight through lace curtains.
Now she wakes up sore
And still in the saddle.
Past the smokestacks and train tracks she rides;
Her horse tosses his head as they cross an endless dirty steel bridge
With the buses and pick-up trucks
High above the wide holy water.
The juju cowgirl loves the prairie grass
And the hot sun from an empty sky;
Leaving the city at night,
She stops beneath the orangey sodium lights by the freeway entrance.
After this,
There is only cool air and the miles ahead.
The juju cowgirl will find her way--
She will use magicks, leather, and horse sense.
She will navigate by the stars,
And no matter the distance or the passing days,
She carries the charm you gave her
And if she loves you
You will know.
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for magpie 40
Sigh. Wow. How beautiful. "only knows one way to kiss, like it's high summer in the mountains." "above the wide holy water"......"only cool air and the miles ahead." "And if she loves you, you will know." This is - Poetry. Beautiful and lovely and it takes me away.........to high summer in the mountains. Wonderful, Shay!
ReplyDeleteI lovelovelove this! And I haven't even looked at the image for Mag40 yet!
ReplyDeleteTruly, Shay, this one carried me past some depressing seedy muck and then out to where I can see some hope. You just keep getting more and more relevant, and I mean that as a high compliment.
xoxo
This has the high, wide and lonesome feel of a country hymn to love and wilderness. An exhilarating read. (And I like the 'Brokeback Mountain' gender-preference reversal!)
ReplyDeletedang it, girl...
ReplyDeletelove this
envious
This was so beautiful and I could visualize her riding along.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful picture you've painted of this cowgirl.
ReplyDeletePS - I wonder what kissing like it's high summer in the mountains is like...I must practice! ;)
I wanna be the Juju Cowgirl.
ReplyDeleteGreat title, Shay! You live by your dreams in your words - thanks for sharing them with us.
ReplyDeleteso sweet and sweeping in its beauty
ReplyDeleteand those high mountains..
good one
Lovely! Cowgirls are special, but juju cowgirls? They're perfection.
ReplyDeleteLike venus, only with her hatbrim pulled low--cowgirl on the half-shell...loved the images in this one, the sense of identity passing through but untouched by the unfeeling surroundings, and of course, the sense of love & tenderness. Very nice work.
ReplyDeleteI want a mandala
ReplyDeleteDear TIger-friend,
ReplyDeleteOh, to be a Juju cowgirl who so knows herself. It must be so wonderful to be so clear and strong and sure. I am guessing you have a lot of Juju in you. I can feel it.
xoxo
Weasel-friend
I wanna be one ......... so nice!
ReplyDelete"She carries the charm you gave her"
ReplyDeleteJust this one line encapsulates the whole of the Magpie picture this week...
I'm going out to buy some cowboy boots...
ReplyDeleteIntense, romantic and a woman you either want to like or be with what more could you ask for?
ReplyDeleteSTILL my favorite poet!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd gol dang, I'm craving me some jujubes, Twizzlers and / or Dots now!!
xoxo
"magicks, leather, and horse sense.
ReplyDeleteShe will navigate by the stars,
And no matter the distance or the passing days,
She carries the charm you gave her"
Aloha from Waikiki :)
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I absolutely love this! Your poetry always fascinates me. You create such wonderful characters.
ReplyDeleteTeresa
I get lost in the magic your words always conjure. I adore the way you write, it has energy, heart and always, such wonderful imagery.
ReplyDeleteWho wouldn't love her?
ReplyDeletegreat lines, great depth.
ps
emmylou is fabu! (plus i can totally relate to the silver goddess hair)
and i am loving rediscovering bonnie raitt.
Just wow.
ReplyDeletehmmmmmm.....I think I have known a JuJu Cowgirl, or TWO....Yeah!!!!
ReplyDeleteShay that is a wonderful piece of writing. It bring to the surface so many untapped feelings.
ReplyDeleteA veritable plethora of good leather images woven with the strings of passion to transcend the great divide. Wonderful, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful images, the worn leather ties the moments together, along with the skies and the earth...
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely piece :)
ReplyDeleteIf all married lovers kissed the way the JuJu Cowgirl must kiss, then there would be less divorce in this world! Once again you have created your own wonderful world in word Shay! You always delight and amaze me! :-)
ReplyDeleteIf all married lovers kissed the way the JuJu Cowgirl must kiss, then there would be less divorce in this world! Once again you have created your own wonderful world in word Shay! You always delight and amaze me! :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! I like the flow, love the strength of the juju cowgirl, and I love the term "juju cowgirl"! My favorite stanza's the last one, and my favorite lines are the last ones:
ReplyDelete"And if she loves you
You will know."
I think I haven't done Magpie Tales in a month, I'm juggling a lot these days. But I miss it and plan to do next week's magpie.